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It's not very well developed, we know next to nothing about the main character and why he is so heartless. You need to try and develop a better understanding of your characters before you send them off on there journey, also update schedules are all over the place. But it has an okay plot so far, just needs development.
Uma história espero que continue assim, de certo modo é bem diferente das outras a finap ser ver num ponto de vista do monstro e desenvolvimento do que estao ao redo e as vezes sua luta por padroes como emoções humanas
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Honestly its not very good. The basic idea is great but it needs editing and a rewrite. There is potential here it just lacks polish. Damn 140 ch
So far i quite enjoy this series, BUT it has one major flaw and that is the rate at which chapters come out it's atrociously slow like the rendering and loading on early 90's pcs, it would be better if the chapters where triple the length but alas they are stupidly short. In short it's fantastic i friggin love it even but it's pathetically short chapters and abysmal rate of updates makes me comptemplate dropping it like a 1 star novel written by a 10 year old.
This story is terrible . It's boring lazy and just bad. i honestly couldn't continue reading after a while the boredom just hit me continuously so again BORING AF
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This would have to be one of my favourite zombie novels so far that I have come across and the writing style just makes it all the more intriguing
Going great so far keep it up. I like how you made a story from a zombies perspective. Will the girl be able to think or will she remain mindless with the regeneration ability?
for now I give this 5 stars since I can see it have a very high potential unlike most of the original novels I read so far. the character design is good, while the background is kinda unclear though.... for story development so far so good. and so far the stability of a chapter a day is good. keep it up :)
I can see a big potential in this One so i will vote Daily More Chaps plz And I hope MC doesn't mutate to other spieces than Zombie Harem and Some Eros plz lol All Hail to Zombie King
A very good novel. The writing is good; way better than the other original zombie novels i read in this site so far, and is not that far off from official novels, even is better than the majority of them. The story makes uses of the elements of surprise and makes the reader view it in an 'open world' feel through the Main Character's eyes. My progress is up to date which is...chapter 4 or 6. The author made me imagine the main character's design not only through Third POV but also through the sight of a side character; which made me 'see' the boy more clearly in an ingenious way. Really commend you Mr/Ms author with that(Color of his skin & eyes in third POV, the state and color of his clothes through the tied up girl). The background is that of a modern world i guess...which is rapidly changing. I can already 'feel' it when i see how the people used to fighting back the main character(how this makes it seem as if they are used to fight and kill other people). All in all, I Love this. And i'll be looking forward to your updates!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
It's not very well developed, we know next to nothing about the main character and why he is so heartless. You need to try and develop a better understanding of your characters before you send them off on there journey, also update schedules are all over the place. But it has an okay plot so far, just needs development.
Uma história espero que continue assim, de certo modo é bem diferente das outras a finap ser ver num ponto de vista do monstro e desenvolvimento do que estao ao redo e as vezes sua luta por padroes como emoções humanas
Cool idea, poor execution. Cool idea, poor execution. Cool idea, poor execution. Cool idea, poor execution. Cool idea, poor execution. Cool idea, poor execution. Cool idea, poor execution. Cool idea, poor execution. Cool idea, poor execution. Cool idea, poor execution. Cool idea, poor execution. Cool idea, poor execution.
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Reveal Spoiler Honestly its not very good. The basic idea is great but it needs editing and a rewrite. There is potential here it just lacks polish. Damn 140 ch
So far i quite enjoy this series, BUT it has one major flaw and that is the rate at which chapters come out it's atrociously slow like the rendering and loading on early 90's pcs, it would be better if the chapters where triple the length but alas they are stupidly short. In short it's fantastic i friggin love it even but it's pathetically short chapters and abysmal rate of updates makes me comptemplate dropping it like a 1 star novel written by a 10 year old.
This story is terrible . It's boring lazy and just bad. i honestly couldn't continue reading after a while the boredom just hit me continuously so again BORING AF
Please don't add a harem or anything like that, it would tremendously ruin your story. Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it
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This would have to be one of my favourite zombie novels so far that I have come across and the writing style just makes it all the more intriguing
Going great so far keep it up. I like how you made a story from a zombies perspective. Will the girl be able to think or will she remain mindless with the regeneration ability?
for now I give this 5 stars since I can see it have a very high potential unlike most of the original novels I read so far. the character design is good, while the background is kinda unclear though.... for story development so far so good. and so far the stability of a chapter a day is good. keep it up :)
I can see a big potential in this One so i will vote Daily More Chaps plz And I hope MC doesn't mutate to other spieces than Zombie Harem and Some Eros plz lol All Hail to Zombie King
A very good novel. The writing is good; way better than the other original zombie novels i read in this site so far, and is not that far off from official novels, even is better than the majority of them. The story makes uses of the elements of surprise and makes the reader view it in an 'open world' feel through the Main Character's eyes. My progress is up to date which is...chapter 4 or 6. The author made me imagine the main character's design not only through Third POV but also through the sight of a side character; which made me 'see' the boy more clearly in an ingenious way. Really commend you Mr/Ms author with that(Color of his skin & eyes in third POV, the state and color of his clothes through the tied up girl). The background is that of a modern world i guess...which is rapidly changing. I can already 'feel' it when i see how the people used to fighting back the main character(how this makes it seem as if they are used to fight and kill other people). All in all, I Love this. And i'll be looking forward to your updates!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.