Minato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your Daddy

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DaoistcaqwL5

reading 9 chapter, here is brief summary of the novel, it chinese novel the user translated, however it more like director cut version rather than true translation where this person here have significanly changed novel, for the better, because the raw version can cause your blood level to spike(if it doesn't then be ashame at your self) it's good and interesting but its slice of life, which not everyone cup of tea,

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Skaviouz

I was confused until I realized this is a fanfiction of a fanfiction. The MTL didn't have a system, I like this version more, and I don't think it's just because it's easier to read, because it totally is. I also noticed some plot points were removed, but I think that's your freedom as a fanfic author and good riddance.

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Cloud_could

Excellent! Fantastic! A Masterpiece in making. I have fallen in love with the cuteness of kushina and the cast with all the goods and bads(none) i embrace this holy grail. YOU! YES, YOU who is wasting time reading comments, go and take a sip of this heavenly nectar and come back as a true man of culture. I mean it stop scrolling and go read its {chef's kiss}.

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Keyboard_Warrior69

I'm confused, is this storry NTR because in the synopsis it was written "Dad why is my hair color different then yours" 🤔

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Ed_Kousuke

I found the MTL version is more enjoyable to read although it is a MTL. One of the thing I found is the MTL version is more light and contain more sense of humour while this one feeling more heavy. This one portrayed the third hokage as an old guilt-ridden man while the real character of the old man is very sly. This cne tried to push danzo as an enemy for targeting the MC. It is said that this translation trying to maintain the slice of life genre in this novel but it cut so many interesting conversation between the characters. overall i think the MTL version is more enjoyable as an slice of life novel.. i don't know how long my comment will exist here...

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MARLENE_ANGEL

OK, TRUTH NO BS-THANK YOU AUTHOR FOR THE EPIC FUN NOVEL- YOU MIGHT GUY HAVE GOLD HERE PEOPLE DO NOT BE DUMB AND READ THIS NOVEL OR BE DUMB ANIMALS THAT CAN NOT READ OR BE DUMB FOR FUN...THIS NOVEL IS FUN AND THOSE NOT WASTE YOUR TIME.[img=update]

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Angel_Whis

i like this translation very much. and hope you will keep translating this. and i read some of the mtl chapters of this novel and i have to say you did a great job translating and improving this novel👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Daoist89yPri

Você devia fazer Naruto e Sasuke feminino pois Indra e ashura era homens então faz os dois seria legal ter uma filha do que um filho e ser o MC vai pegar Hinata poder pegar Naruto e Sasuke também

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I_Am_YourDad

I can't thank author enough for improving the original ff. The original trash but with a bit of Author's touch it had become a Masterpiesce

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Daoist89yPri

Você vai fazer Sasuke feminino faz Naruto também de qualquer jeito ele vai pegar Mikoto também aí você adiciona satsuki e Naruko no harém simples

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PUERKO_Senpai

Are there lemons??

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Kono_Timoda

Honestly it's a pretty poor quality fanfictions, like 3/5 . I was expecting a FF that will have the MC and kushina learn to love each other and fall in love and see how there relationship blooms. But, it's a wish fulfilment and what you get is a decent third-rate fic that honestly feels like the author has no experience: the environment is not described, immersive is easily broken, the pov changes happen too fast and the author seems to focus on the system a lot rather than the characters. It feels like I'm reading script with extra details, like after this event this happens, instead of an outsider watching a story. I feel like Ch 1 - 20 was a good start and then 20 - 40, with how you introduced each love interest, started to feel very cheap. There was no tension and each relationship feels shallow. Plus starting to feel like a translation (I know it's not a translation) and phases feel unnaturally to read. For the author, I feel like you are trying to do too much for each chapter, and you don't give time for the plot points to breath. Either slow it down and try and make the dialogue more natural or extend the chapters to 3000 words, 1000 is way too low for what you are trying to do. Great idea btw, keep on trying 👍🏾

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Big_Sasa

I read it in Spanish but I don't have words to describe how good this fanfic is

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FinnsRevenge

Author, i saw you read Einlion's fics so now i have to ask. Are you planning on taking inspiration from that cuck for harem style? By that I mean yuri inside the harem and possibly outside? Ima be honest bro, the fact you read so far into his disgusting hero academia fic worries me about where you're gonna take this.

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LeonardoDiCaprio1

Nice book initially I thought it's a translation but apparently it's not anyway keep up the hard work author and Good luck you will need it. while writing fan-fics 😂😂😂🤣😂😂🤣🤣😂😂😂

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Patrick_hell123

women get pregnant easier after giving birth

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Comment_KinG

atleast well you tried and it pleased the kind(me)☆☆☆

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John_Rex_98

well yes of course......my only complaint was the rants.....the took half the chapter.....