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Ethan possessed everything one could desire, wealth, happiness, luxury cars, and a loving girlfriend.
He had never fought a day in his life, but then suddenly, he woke up in a different world.
A world were destruction and bloodshed was the norm. A world where the weak had no place to survive.
Ethan now possessing the body of a boy who had failed his awakening twice and was on his last try, now stood in this world.
Can Ethan who never fought a day in his life survive in a world where battles and death occurs every second, minute, hour and day.
Would he rise through the ashes of the world, or would he burn with it.
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Sumulat ng pagtatasaI love where this is headed. Asher’s journey is really interesting, he’s thrown into a new world filled with some odd but fun family members and characters. One of which may turn out to have a gambling problem lol. Asher’s smart, strong, and has some seriously badass skills. His rapier is just as cool as the name sounds, and I really enjoy the unique way he uses it. Watching Asher grow stronger with each challenge is honestly such a great ride. Make sure to check it out and show the author some love for the great story being crafted. You’ll probably end up loving it too!
This is my second book. And there is nothing much to say, aside from the facts that, I bring to you, yet another PEAK. Enjoy the joy ride, make sure your seatbelt is on.
Massive gary stu (I'll justify that by discussing MC's powers as of the first 16 chapters if you dont want to get that minor spoiler just check the tldr at the end). pre transmigration mc has his life in order living well with friends and a solid relationship, so far so intriguing cant say I've seen that before could be an interesting twist coming up. randomly transmigrates and oh would you look at that he's the shunned son of a duke family, cliche but we'll see. it takes 11 chapter for him to awaken and suddenly he has a system that gives him the [absolute physique] as a newbie gift for no reason at all, the physique gives him absolute talent in anything physical and he can learn it all by doing it once... his awakened element is lightning btw (a bit standard but okay) his weapon is a rapier which is kinda cool imo, but oh would you look at that the rapier allows him to teleport gives him life steal and is overall completely op. Oh did i also mention his system just randomly protects him from all mental or soul interference and it also talks. Not to mention mc is also an unparalleled genius who would study medicine to help his girlfriend with her university work while doing his own major. that is his power level as of chapter 16 in that time he's done literally nothing to deserve any of it, no scheme no fights nothing he just went to the library and then went to the awakening cermemony. so tldr mc is unholy op, worked for nothing and the story pacing is snail speed. according to chapter titles he has his first proper fight in chapter 35. story is wholly unremarkable imo, language and grammar is good but the story lacks the spark of creativity that would make it worth reading.
The story is alright tbh better than most in this app but the writing style is so bad that it seems AI even if it's not(I'll give the author the benefit of doubt).Some chapters seem like a total waste as if written just to add another chapter with nothing happening.Its full of Robotic Dialogue and Unnatural Exchanges Excessive Explanation of Obvious Actions If you can bear with the above mentioned then give it a try .
To sum it up it's not that good but not that bad. The writing is very weird and the author writes in a way so that he can take the maximum amount of words to write little things. Lets take an example of the novel Journey of the fate destroying emperor.If this novel was written in a similar way without the intention to just increase the word count it would have been less than HALF the current chapters(i am not even exaggerating). I use gemini pro or chatgpt to polish the chapters before reading and the word count gets half without any loss of context or information.
The only negative thing I can say about this novel is that there are not enough chapters. I was hooked as soon as I finished the 1st chapter. I highly recommend this novel.
Novel is really good… the MC is OP and intelligent. Doesn’t hide his powers and so on Well what can I say besides give it a try you will like it 💯💯🔥
Little world-building but the world-building that is there is good. The story is alright but not great. Character design was the major flaw here with the protagonist being an absolute moron as we see in many novels on webnovel and in general recently the protagonist is just a moron. He thinks he's a genius when he does obvious shit. And he has an ego so big he thinks he's a god. Read about 100 chapters and overall I'd give this a 4/10. I'd recommend looking for a better novel but if you really want to read this one you'll probably regret it but it won't be the worst choice.
I like it but the Author makes the fights too theartrical and all about poetry and whatnot instead of the action. Take this for example he wrote that Wuthenya, one of the strongest people in this world was only breaking the sound barrier and Asher just a weaklink by comparison can do the same. Doesn't make any kind of sense and just makes me want to skip the fights altogether.
Story is fine, MC is op but I don't mind since that's what I like but the Author's writing style is horrible (not his spelling). The reason I'm saying his writing style is horrible is because he uses "Amplification: Amplification is a writing technique where an author repeats an idea with additional detail, intensity, or imagery to emphasize its importance. It's meant to heighten emotion, tension, or clarity by expanding on the same point in multiple ways." Amplification isn't bad but the author uses amplification way too much, which successfully builds hype but also causes each chapter to feel repetitive and dragged-out, as if the story is recapping rather than moving forward.
Just another story ruined with a system cheat and overpowered gifts that copies every standard trash trope
The book is good BUT The author has unnecessarily repeated/streched the same details over and over again for 5-7 chapters. For example the same fight will be described from 3 different perspectives with every detail being repeated over, and what could have been wound up in 5-6 chapters will go on for the next 15 chapters... Just read the fight between Aser and Ryean during the academy entrance scene, and you will get what I am trying to convey...
Ipakita ang SpoilerUnlike his last novel this one starts off being well written (0 issues), the world is extremely captivating and you immediately want to know more about, the main character is extremely strong and doesn't hide it for no reason, my only slight gripe is that I wish the story advanced a tiny bit faster, but that's also just me wanting more.
My second review... and all I gotta say is: If you’re craving some true OP-ness... "!!!!DO NOT skip this one 💥🔥!!!" Thank you for your attention 🙏 MOGA: Make OPness Great Again 💪🧢
will there be any romance . any female leads . or mc will become gay like other family members
It's pretty good. Definitely enjoyed reading so far(chp 252). Still, there are some things I'd like to critique. 1. While the action scenes are overall very well written, they can sometimes drag on for multiple chapters, with both the enemy and asher entering their finalfinalfinal form repeatedly. When this happens to often during one fight it just takes the tension and hype out. 2. I really like his abilities, or at least the ones he awakened at the beginning. Having a rapier be his weapon is pretty unique and original. I also like the healing and astra storage abilities that gear him more towards a battle of endurance type build. The teleportation ability is really cool but gets used pretty much never. I think in all the chapters i've read he used it maybe 3 times in a fight. I also think the addition of star affinity was completely unnecessary. It just adds way too much stuff which results in nothing being developed as much as it should. Also the space affinity allowing him to teleport just leads to his teleportation ability being used even less than it was already. 3. Lastly, asher feels just like the potential man of this story. Everyone always talks about how much of a monster he is but even after 252 chapters, whenever there's a real threat asher has to summon his brothers to rescue him. I'm not saying he should be the strongest right from chapter one, but there definitely is a way to make him feel actually strong and not just strong when he's playing with other children. In this way i think asher's eldest brother Malrik is a much better character. Someone who is objectively strong, but still doesn't feel overpowered. Whenever malrik fights you feel how strong he is but you still fret if he may loose this time.
Ipakita ang SpoilerMay-akda LORDTEE
Hmm…I’m writing a review again…guess that means the books awesome😋 No seriously it is, The MC character is OP and well designed as are other characters in the story they feel alive. The world building is beautiful and intriguing so far and the story is well written, so no stumbling over bad grammar. This is the authors second novel and if his first novel is anything to go by this story is going to be PEAK!