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You’d think waking up in the Naruto Universe would be a dream come true.
For most people? Maybe.
But for me?
No kekkei genkai.
No Senju vitality.
No Uzumaki stamina.
No Uchiha eyes.
Just… me. Weak. Ordinary. A civilian in a world built on bloodlines and battles.
I was ready to die in the background. Just another nobody swept up in the chaos of shinobi wars and cursed fates.
Until it happened.
[System Binding Complete.]
[Welcome, User.]
[Starter Gift: Goro Goro no Mi — Rumble-Rumble Fruit.]
[You are now the inheritor of thunder.]
And just like that, everything changed.
I could feel it — the voltage crackling in my veins, the storm whispering in my ear.
No more chakra limitations. No more clan inferiority.
I didn’t need Sharingan to see death coming.
I’d outrun it at the speed of lightning.
The villages took notice.
The Akatsuki tried to control me.
Even the tailed beasts learned to fear thunder.
Because I wasn’t just another shinobi anymore.
I was something else.
A storm given form.
They called me a god.
Once I stood at the peak of the Shinobi world, I turned my gaze outward — to other realms, other timelines, and other universes.
I walked among Shinigami.
Faced pirates who challenged the sea.
Clashed with Saiyans beneath shattered skies.
But a question lingered.
Who's this mysterious being everyone keeps talking about?
Maybe I’m more than just a transmigrator.
Maybe I was never meant to be human in the first place.
“Lightning doesn't bow.
It strikes.”
From the Hidden Leaf…
To the edge of the multiverse…
I will carve my name into legend.
Because thunder doesn’t ask permission.
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There would be consistent updates, 2 chapters a day.
Mc doesn't get spoonfed by the system.
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hold reading at chapter 5, what do you mean by mc eating logia type devil fruit rumble rumble fruit but physical attack can still land on him why bother giving him devil fruit if he cant become intangible?
I think I'm going to be sick. I've read this fanfic before, and I still can't understand how it manages to give me the same disgusting feeling. A 7-year-old at Kage level, with ridiculously huge chakra, trying to link it all to a 1% Senju bloodline—which is beyond impossible. On top of that, he's training with 250 kilograms at age 7, and of course, he explains it with that same 1% Senju bloodline. I guess the MC is secretly an Otsutsuki, because there's no other explanation for this.
Chinese translation, and grammar isn’t that good. Still talks that Chinese way with the expressions. Also 7 year old mc is kage level already so that’s already bad. Also hes apparently engaged to a konoha prince too.
don't write if u can't even understand what logia means. Wdym his hands hurt when he uses his df. Is it so hard to comprehend ??The premise is great but the logic is dogshit.
Story doesn’t make that much sense I would probably research more about devil fruits especially logia’s cause I just don’t understand how he gets hurt from punches and stuff idk also just not my story really
Logic left the room in this one. The OG author probably wanted to temper him down with all the stupid nerfs but it only got further away from the material, and this stuff managed to annoy almost everyone. Logia's not logia, he can zap himself with the fruit power. Akainu would howl in pain every time he uses magma fruit.
Good beginning, interesting cheat and its use. But after Uchicha Massacre the story gets strange in a bad way - things are happening without proper reason. Then, after graduation it's just canon with OP MC who isn't strong enough to defeat Otsutsuki, but stopped increasing his strength. From this moment nothing new is happening.
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La verdad en si la novela china es bastante mala y casi no tiene sentido pero tiene unos 500 caps si no estoy mal aquí está el raw por si alguien lo quiere leer 开局火影得到响雷果实 también lo puedes buscar por wuxiabox esta como Naruto, Start with thunder fruit
I think the story is developing in the right way. I don't want the character to be too strong, it would be very boring. From myself, I can only support the author and wish him a successful and finished story.
I'd support myself by giving the Fanfic a 5 star. The fic is just about a guy that dies, transmigrates and grows stronger. You can read it, it's pretty good.
this is a very hard story to get behind the settings behind how the MC acquires his powers might as well just be a placeholder because it does not function the way it's supposed to function. somehow the author is confusing chakra nature with a devil fruit which is inherently a lower tiered power
Veamos que se puede decir de este fanfic con menos lógica que un harem Pokémon..... El MC tiene la fruta del rayo pero le tiene miedo a óbito cuando tiene un fuerza nivel casi kage y su razonamiento óbito seguro alcanzo fuerza superkage jajajaja óbito un superkage ? No me hagas reír. Segundo razón por la que me voy es que este metiendo cosas como cultivo, es totalmente mí gusto así que pueden ignorar está parte. Debo admitir que me dio vergüenza ajena leer su presentación en clase... En serio quien carajo se presenta diciendo que quiere 2 esposas ? Bue no hay nada más o tal ves si pero tengo demasiada vagancia para molestarme en escribirlo
История по началу хорошая но постепенно становится какой то хернёй ну можно принять что в семь ты уже каге но после рорана история идёт полностью на перекосяк история становится до смешного тупым не советую читат если не хочешь разочароваться
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I can only recommend this story to someone, that likes when mc at 7 years old already has kage strenght and doesn't care, when there is lack of logic in a story overall. Sadly og author didn't understand how df works (here mc needs to use chakra for it to work, where df originally only required stamina for usage). When it comes to mc's chakra....i rarely have seen such a bs in fanfiction. Here mc at 6 years old has chunin amount of chakra (mc's status screen) and yet at the same time he is able to casually creater 15...i repeat 15! shadow clones!. I don't think, that i need to explain how bs this is (especially for a civil with only 1% senju bloodline). Oh don't worry, since it's not the end when it comes to bs chakra amount increase. At 7 years old he already has Elite Jonin emount of chakra and few weeks later kage lvl one (facepalm). I repeat! He's a civil boy with only 1% of Senju bloodline! Now lets talk about something else. At 6 years old he already knows out of nowhere chidori and then later on learns Rasengan, without any worries on how he will explain to others on how he learned those jutsu, that only very few ppl know and use them. At 5 or 6 (i don't remember anymore because of so many bs things, that happened) he buys and carries on himself 250kg of weight during training. I repeat! He is a 5/6 years old civil with only 1% of Senju Bloodline! In a story it is said, that even Might Guy bought 100 kg weights (500kg in totall during training, 4 limbs and chest) as an adult. Sasuke in his first year (before Uchiha Massacre) acts like a psycho and during first day in academy tries to unalive Kiba during sparing with Fireball Jutsu without any reason. No one has problem with it and everyone glazes young Uchiha for it (facepalm). Sasuke before Uchiha Massacre didn't act like that. In the very first day of academy, Iruka chooses already a student of the year based only on taijutsu sparing (facepalm). Iruka acting friendly with Naruto from the very first day in academy is actually the smallest error in this story. There were probably other bs's, but at this point i don't remember them. Read this story, if you're okay with absurd and bs mc strenght development and lack of logic in a story. The only good thing about this story, that i can think of is its translation, but even this one has its problems (like for example xanxia element of black and stinky liquid being extracted for mc, after easting df, that doesn't make any sense and could be simply removed from a story).
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