Spiderman Evolution

LV 12

SuperVegeto

The start of the novel is good but I hope you do continue because I don’t want to invest my tune and then you stop halfway threw. You have the potential to have something great here but please don’t stop or quit on us and don’t worry about creating a lot of new content you can always copy some of the original stuff just try to add your own twist because in the end that’s why we read these type of stuff because we have a ****ty day or we just want to relax and we read peoples work and I like it so far just keep it up and thank you

LV 7

Melshan

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LV 4

Dwikex

if you keep updating all the power stones I will give you ... all the power stones I have,,,,,ok....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

PotReap

I'm liking it so far. it seems to be a pretty good story. whether or not you make this into a harem is up to you, but I recommend that you do add a bit of romance because that is already portrayed in the comics.

LV 14

Wolfrunner

I find this novel slightly interesting yet slightly cringy as there is a bit too much teenage angst for my liking. However what strikes me as interesting, and I don't know if the author intended it or not, is that the main character was in the military and almost seems to have a form of PTSD from his time there. If it's intentional my hat is off to the author and if not I suggest playing it that way and when you introduce the harem aspect you want you use the girls as a grounding/healing element for the MC to make him more normal.

LV 12

Space_Fox

As long as you dont drop it :) BDO is committed to exceeding expectations on every engagement, big or small, for every client, local or multinational. BDO is committed to exceeding expectations on every engagement, big or small, for every client, local or multinational. (This is just for the 140-word, it's what I had already in my ctrl-v from before for an essay so who cares)

LV 14

KxV09

Mc personality a little confusing, just like an annoying teenage brat, although technically he is actually one .....................5* for the BatDoms

LV 3

DragonGod100

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LV 5

8Psycho

I could only read single chapter as the writing quality is so bad. Therefore I do not have anything else to say about this story................................................ . .

LV 5

Gabrielcm

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LV 4

BlakkStan

Chaps are good, characters are good so far, needs more chaps, recommendations are suggested, post more chaps for other novels to, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU

LV 3

DragonGod100

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LV 5

Otakusalem

More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

LV 5

songoten165

Well, ıt is a crap as a story. Honestly i don't know which one iş more bad, a brat who wish to be bad boy or an antihero who fucks whoever he meets.

LV 4

Kyfighter

I personally think it's amazing keep it uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuup

LV 6

boread

Warning! Warning! You were targeted by me!!!! I quite interested with this story.... but it need more chapter for me to start reading.... Well author first of all hope you already plan for rhis story.... hope you never drop this... hope you will not be effected by readers comment... hope you dont force any character into relationship...

LV 13

dan0206

Good update frequency. Easy to read, does not need the effort to interpret the meaning and has an interesting story that keeps me wanting more. It is on the darker side but not that much relatively speaking. Overall an enjoyable read.

LV 3

DEUSMACHNA

Whoaa HAREM HAREM need more harem 🤣🤣 HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

LV 4

Mr_No_One

Story is cool, i like it all in all, just that, i dont know what else to say so........... .. Yea, all in all, it is a good story, bbut, i personally didn't like it as much as others would.