Hollywood ShowBiz Lord

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AN_13

What a shameless self-review............... But what I can I do, I love my own work.............. I want to see how far my work can go...................

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ZiiMakc

Why it's the same as Hollywood. Re:coded novel on this site¿ ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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sabada

So if you've not looked at the tag and clicked on Hollywood one you should. This story is posted on Oct 30.....another story which is LITERALLY the same exact one almost except a few minor background details was posted weeks earlier....so either this dude is that author too or well he just copied and pasted and change some background and name details....I read the other one first and 13 chapters in this one is same basically so far including the time in history it starts, movies and child author.....

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Aeternabilis

Okay so let me put this in here since the author hasn't bothered to. It is a harem. So if you're like me who are fed up with them then you won't like this story. It was good up to here, grammar was awful but you could see it gradually get better witch is a plus. The thing that has made me drop is you have guessed it the harem... kinda annoyed the author didn't put it in as I wouldn't have wasted my time if I knew. Worse is this is a modern setting so harem makes even less sense... What kinda annoyed me is that the mc tries to justify that harems are okay and that only true love between a man and woman can have it. Like wtf it's like letting your significant other fck around, would you accept that? No, nobody would. Yeah soooooo, gl to author but pls put in harem tag cause for all the ppl like me it's a waste of time and you wouldn't have to read comments like this.

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Blutmond

Good

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_Cooldude_

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dragon_guy

I always wanted read this kind of entertainment novel. I felt like it's a bit fast paced but I don't mind. This is one of the best novels I read. Thank you author for writing wonderful novel. Keep up the good work.

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FraulC

This is a good back to the past wish fulfillment in Hollywood. That is if you could get pass the atrocious grammar. I hope the author gets some beta or editor to actually help with the quality of the story.

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Acsmaster007

good mannn.....like it but you should fast forward to 2000 s because now there is no special effects or good movies to do..... or marvel.....or beauties like scarlett or others....kkkk

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hawkmoon

This is a very promising story. I hope that this does not get dropped.

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Joro_ro

He just literally copy another story, even the sinopsis is exactly the same, try to be original man, it's a shame that you do that with the story of other people

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1laris

Bom demais!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ansiosa para o próximo capítulo ❤️❤️😩😩😩😩😩❤️❤️❤️❤️😩😩 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Sarah_Lawart

As in my previous comment I emphasize that it is rushing the story and not doing real world building, I will add that there is a huge problem with the interaction of the characters and the plot in general, where did they meet? When? How did they meet? How was the process of finding a publisher? When did the MC start acting classes? How did he meet his teacher, being that he's a renowned former actor? How was the audition for the role in the theater play and when did it happen? Honestly, I don't want to sound condescending but it is necessary that you as an author acquire the mentality of asking questions in order to be able to flesh out the plot, because in the current picture it seems that the character just gets the things he wants without any difficulty, besides, it sucks that you put things in that should be implied, such as the character's lack of general inexperience in what is due to things like business, among other things. It takes time to improve, take your time and start acquiring a more inquisitive mindset and this will greatly improve your writing.

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TonyOrochi

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Shajid

love it. sad that it was droppedm.............................................................................................................

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_Cooldude_

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_Cooldude_

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Puzzle1231

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_Cooldude_

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Potofhoney

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