/ Teen / That Girl!i
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Unliked by both of her parents, she was left in the care of her grandmother when the both divorced and she was only 7 yrs old.....now she's the girl whose beauty even makes the moon shy and will power that can defeat even the vicious people.... Who is this girl? Thinks a certain young master...!i!i
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Very very well written. The vocabulary and grammar are spot on. The plot is epic but most of all, the character growth is really well done! Excellent novel!
!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!! work on spellings
Story - good.. Interested character designs - well I like the girl more far better I don't know but I do.. hehehe.. overall awesome. the story development is in smooth pace. No haste nothing... go for it keep it up author san...
It's a smooth sailing writing and it has an interesting plot. the synopsis itself piqued my interest and that made me clicked to the first chapter until I reach the recent episode. goodluck author!!!
Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more readers.
HAHAHA I'm quite a shameless author so i will give a full 5 star review to my own story...!! Well honestly speaking this is my first time experience in writing and i do hope from the bottom of my heart that you'll enjoy reading this piece of art from my side. Thank you!!
Very interesting story, fast paced with interesting characters. The little love hearts inside the book are a nice touch, cute! [img=recommend]
You have potential keep going! The writing plot started off well. There's some kind of mystery initiated by you so I won't ask you to rush it up. Although it's only 2 chapters right now your English is fine. I hope it gets better as you keep on writing. Do not stop if its in your potential. Good luck!
Quite an intriguing start! But it's hard to give a whole headed review, when there's only four chapters so far. But the chapters i've read was really good! And i'm positive that the author has something amazing up his sleeve for us !