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Journey to the land of the Little Ones
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What is your worst nightmare? Failing the Chemistry exam on the last week of school before the Summer Holiday? Probably because of the failure, your parents wouldn't allow you to travel with them to a cool place? Or sending you to an unknown relative to learn for your supplementary exam?
The Bond twins got all of them. Unfortunate souls.
But where the train takes them is beyond their imagination.
Genre: Scifi
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- Kualitas Terjemahan
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- Pengembangan Cerita
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The story is awesome and I mostly love the story development. It is really good and my second best is the world background. It is quite real and interesting. Bravo.
The chapters were long per say. All in all, it was a nice read. With a slow start to build up the story, it was enjoyable. Though perfectionists will surely react to your grammar. Well not me, haha š It was okay and you have your own style of writing. Polish it more and you will surely discover it in the future! Good luck on Spirity and I hope you will get what you deserve, Movie? TV series? name it! š
The novel is very good, builds up the surprise well, the description of the entire classroom scene is awesome, it didn't feel drab or boring at all. There are a few grammar mistakes bugging me. But over in all it is an amazing piece and I'm excited about where this will lead me.
Reading about how Conrad was literally roasting grandpa for his age made me realise that I'm not part of this generation.. at least I rememberedš¤£ this story is really good. it starts off with a laid back, slice of life style that I found quite refreshing as it's very much opposed to the tension I'm used to seeing in many other novels to start. the writing quality could use some work but I can't complain as I can understand the story just fine and appreciate the story development as well.. This story is underrated and I definitely recommend it. Great work Author!
This novel is really good, if anyone is reading this I am telling you to read this. I love how they have to take a extra exam, and the train.....Its so good its like an Isekai but without dying lol. anyway good