Ki in Marvel ( rewriting)

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Kenrio

I started hating this fic when author added dragon balls. he already have a op system but he add this too. such a waste of his with good potential

LV 5

mikedanger

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

LV 5

Vastoking

The power scaling is quiet bad, the author say Cap America is 70 - 100 which is enough to blow up a mountain at most captain America should be a 4 since he still gets hurt by a gun. Goku at the beginning of cannon without much training as a kid could shrug of a fall from a cliff and got shot by Bulma and his power level was at freaking TEN the power scaling messed the novel up

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PainIsReality

The story starts Very rushed and the power level system is wrong and doesnt match dbz. with this battle power system the steve can blow up a moon and the hulk can explode planets

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DarkDei

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BlackDragneel

Immense Potential, It has. Keep Writing, You should. Story progression is good. Mc's power growth is consistent and not over the top like some other ones. Character interaction is good. Overall would definitely recommend.

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SORCERERSUPREME_7

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LV 1

Taugh

Messed up power levels, he thinks 200 is 1 ton while in dbz its planet level. Really bad grammar. Characters are like dolls, you will know what they will do next all the time. Also makes me cringe how author does these 'ahahahahh' laughs.

LV 13

funmaxwell

🤔 I find this storys premise is very interesting to me as dragon Ball fan. but I recognize it's not without flaws. the story's is very readable. As the grammar overall I'd give it about a 3.5 out of 5. so bad grammar really isn't an issue for this story. I'd say one problem with the story is it seems to be moving quite fast with the time skips and the chapters feel kind of short. this could become a much bigger problem if not handled properly. as most of the story takes place from main characters perspective and not a lot of time is spent building up the personality of other characters and interactions with the main character. as his mom and dad in the story just feel like cardboard cutouts right now as not a lot of emphasis is spent on fleshing them out as characters or people. another problem is the dragon balls existing in the MCU. As this could completely break the characters grind in the story if he wished for like something like infinite money. or he just wished for the knowledge he wanted or abilities instead of using the system. another problem I find is that he can build the healing tanks using Bulma knowledge. the problem with this is Bulma never got her hands on the healing tanks of the Frieza empire. so she never got the chance to reverse engineer it. so she shouldn't know anything about it. so it's complete bull shit on the author's party the main character can build it at all. if you read this Mr author and you're really doubtful of what I'm saying think about it Bulma never got on Frieza spaceship during the Frieza saga. as she spent most of her time hiding from them. also when Frieza came to Earth during the Android saga trunks pretty much a vaporized Frieza spaceship and in the process destroying any healing tanks that it might have had. then there weren't any other chances for the technology to fall into her hands to reverse engineer until super showed up. I think at the end of super it was either destroyed or remainder of Frieza forces used it to leave Earth. so Bulma never had her hands on the technology to reverse engineer. so the main character should not know how to make the healing tanks from Bulma knowledge. what he should know how to make though is a time machine the spaceship Goku used to get namek and the gravity room that was on Goku spaceship and the one Vegeta used that we see frequently in the series. and the power level scouters. as well as Android 16 and the capsules. also somewhat of a gray area but possibly any of the vehicles used in the series. I don't know if you thought of this the power level scouters could be used in search and rescue. so the main character could sell the tech off for that specific purpose. also artificial gravity has application for spaceships. so I could probably sell some type of artificial gravity generator to NASA in the story.

LV 1

PercyJackson_109

so ...Ahem~... this story is pretty nice lads, go give it a spin, it'll surely be worth it, I think..... ...................................

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ReMormius

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Lentz_Dejean

No chapters can’t read any of it. For 140 characters B. B

LV 5

Hyuga_Tobirama

The artwork looks cold and I was really looking forward to reading this especially since he’s reincarnated into Marvel and his suit with the splinter cell goggles looks really good but there is NO CHAPTERS

LV 6

Phoenix1998

i binged the story. Looks good so far. i binged the story. Looks good so far.i binged the story. Looks good so far.i binged the story. Looks good so far.

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starking

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