/ Anime & Comics / Unstoppable (Seven Deadly Sins)
Unstoppable (Seven Deadly Sins)
Peringkat tidak cukup
Ringkasan
This is my first novel so sorry if there is anything bad about the story.
As Meliodas and the sins are out patrolling the area a couple miles away from Liones, they meet someone named Asmodeus who threatens Meliodas that if he ever goes on a slaughter again, He will kill Meliodas.
Just who is Asmodeus and why does he have it out for Meliodas?
A Seven Deadly Sins Fanfiction
tagar
Penggemar
-
![SYNAX]()
SYNAX Berpartisipasi 28 -
![Rock_Drake]()
Rock_Drake Berpartisipasi 13 -
![dsss_ddd]()
dsss_ddd Berpartisipasi 10
Status Power Mingguan
-- Peringkat
Power 
-- Power
stone Anda Mungkin Juga Menyukai
3Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas Terjemahan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
Bagikan pikiran Anda dengan orang lain
Tulis ulasan
The writing quality is very good, I haven’t seen any mistakes In grammar and is very understandable. Easily one of the best In writing quality I’ve seen on this site. For update stability I put 5 star because there nothing much to see. The story development looks like it’s going the right direction, and the author is just trying to get everything settled. For character development: the authors seems to be trying to integrate him into the story and all character reactions seem very reasonable. World background is seven deadly sins In which is a very good anime but, I have yet to see a decent fan fic on it yet so I’m very excited for this one. 10/10 need more!
So far the protagonist is nothing more than a super powerful spectator.....7 chapters to see the OG story of the anime shorter version....Just from the initial story I already knew that it wasn't for me, good luck to whoever continues
As the other review has said it has no flaws in grammar so far. nothing has been forced they have gave us hits on his goal. I say it a good story and I can't wait for next chapter already.