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Sirius Black (SI)

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Penulis: LazyWizard

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A guy was reading A prisoner of Azkaban while walking on a road when out of nowhere he was hit by a truck (It was actually his fault). He thought he had died but when he opened his eyes the first thing he saw was a stag made of lights scaring away a Dementor that was inches away from his face...

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And Check out my other work A JON SNOW SI

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LukeDoyle21

Good to see some more Sirius stories, excited to see where you go with it

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Rizki_Caturianto

A great Harry Pottee fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😁👍👍 I usually don't like fanfic story where MC become the character (either main or side character), but I quite like this story.. I like how Sirius change so much in this story, and he also made Harry change (that what Godfather/Guardian should do to Harry.. I hope Sirius also do it in film or book).. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍👍👍

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Golias

it's not bad really, but Sirius is too "godfather" for my taste, not the mafia type, but the kind where the story develops with Sirius surrounding Harry with love and affection, other than that, I don't like the nature of the mc, he it's very saintly, I don't like this type of mc, I'd prefer it to be at least neutral, anyway… again, the story isn't bad, but I don't recommend it for those who don't like those points above.

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Lackada1sical

Evaluation: Subpar. (This is too hyped & spammed for high star review). WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical error, however, monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process which is just a repeat of the cannon book of HPVerse. 4/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. Too book-cannon compliant which begs to differ what is the SI for? 2/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. Lack of utilization of HPVerse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. Too wholesome for my tastes. The only difference MC-SI made here is to stabilize Sirius Black & Harry mental state. 2/5 US: The stability of updates are good enough as author-san made sure to publish quality writing with less mistakes over quantity. 4/5 WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

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SDIVAD

I haven’t read this year but you can’t take this story siriously ….. ….. ….. …. …. …. … … … .. .. .. . . . I’ll show myself the door

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hero4hire

good novel, but not my type. Mc get too much into role playing, so much so that he is 'sirius' with cannon knowledge instead of the other way around.

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Wesley_Hylry

are you Serious? likr... it's okay that you have the free option, but that falls short

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Tony_Pecoraro

A great read but you got too finish please. There’s not too many ff with sirus black.🙏.……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

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This is one of the best Harry Potter si fanfics I read and I am a person so reads almost read all Harry Potter fanfics in FF ,MTL and WN. keep going bro u have my full support 💯

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Tylor_Roney

love HP stories with si but why serius lol never liked him I always though he was just as bad as the Dursleys but I guess people glorified him but truth is he never cared for harry and was someone who had some fettish for James potter

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john_padaoan

Your update is slow .... update more just copy some ideas in in some novels

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