Soul Land: Way To The Heaven

LV 5

Psan

Lemons/Segs/happy♡time? who will be in the hârêm?.... Add Hu Liena Red Haired Superior Version. (If a girl is 10/10... if her hair is RED, she becomes a 12/10.. if her eyes are green/blue too? 13/10)

LV 2

Rain1ngDay

The storyline features an absolutely interesting MC with the typical habit of a shonen protagonist who wants to become stronger for the sake of those around him, after going through a tragedy. I hope that in the future, this section will be expanded and developed to become more unique and dimensional. I'm pretty tired of most MCs coming from fanfics where the authors put too much of themselves, resulting in characters who are hypocritical, 0% romance in their lives, and empathy. I am not sure if this is a disadvantage or a plus in terms of storytelling priorities. I have noticed that the author seems to be quite focused on side stories and other characters besides the MC, which may be directly or indirectly related to the MC. However, I hope that the main storyline will receive more attention and development, as the basics of the main story need to be firm and gripping before exploring side stories.

LV 4

Vincent_Kun

Dissappointing ................

LV 6

TFH

Well... Its not bad, for once the mc dosnt has a dozen spirits nor they are supreme golden dragons or some other BS LOL.... MC spirit is extremely common with so far no apparent hidden power. What differentiates mc from others is that MC is from an earth version where monsters invade through portals and he was a hunter there. So he starts practicing his previous life abilities where each skill can count as a individual spirit ring ability which completely breaks the limit of 9 abilities per person at max level in the lower world.... AUthor needs to focus more on the main story and not so much in the sidre and background characters. A good example, he focused like 5 chapters on Tang Hao (Tang San father) about how he meet the blue silver emperor girl up until the point he found mc.... Not really needed in my opinion. Lastly.... MC survives on plot alone, i almost flipped my table where mc just got his first spirit ring at 6 years old and fought while injured against over 500 monkey beasts in the forest and won, despite 1 being 7000 years old, a few dozen in the 1000 range and a few HUNDREDS in the 500-999 range...i was like ẄṬḞ:... its fine if you want an op mc but this is overkill

LV 2

Skiffard

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LV 10

Ashura03

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