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Hey if you don't stop here to read this story, I took some time to write it so that it would follow an original script.
This story tells the story of the unstoppable rise of Aegon VI, Bastard of Winterfell and King of the Seven Kingdoms.
As you may have guessed, but this is an SI Jon Snow, I want to clarify that even if the MC is reincarnated as Jon Snow, he is not and will not act like Jon Snow.
The Protagonist is a person who has been lucky, he does not deserve it and will not be a holy or divine character, incapable of doing harm or a mistake, he is just a person like everyone else who has been lucky, if you are still here and you are curious about what happens next, I invite you to read this story.
If you don't like this story, that's your right and I'm sorry about that, but I will ask you not to judge too quickly and to take the time to read a few chapters before you decide to give up.
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i like the story tho other than MC everyone else feels a bit dumber and the plot seems bit rushed
Every part of this story is forced plot points. It's basically a Gary Stu except that there are constant poorly written in flaws/mistakes that the main character has to work his way around the problem with that is that because they are poorly written, Is that most of the time these mistakes are easily avoidable but like I said, purposely, not avoided, making you really question the characters intelligence. Not to mention the main character is incredibly chaotic in personality Is literally like if you were to mix a child and an adult And throw them into a arrogant teenager it's just pure annoyance anyway I gave writing ability three stars because while this was pretty bad, I do think the author has talent I gave update stability. Three stars because I haven't been around this story long enough to have a clear understanding of how often or well they update Story development I gave one star because well the story started off, fairly strong-ish But went downhill pretty quickly I gave character design three stars because the characters were pretty bad, but bar the atrocity that is the main character. You can kind of sometimes see faint, resemblances of what they were supposed to be. World background I gave four stars simply because the author seems to have done a lot of research, so even though there was a lot of BS all throughout the story, there were some things that made sense
I hope you all have a great time reading this fanfiction, I had a lot of trouble putting it out because I didn't think I was good enough at it but I think sometimes you have to take courage and get started if you like this story I am grateful to you in advance and I hope that you can continue to follow me throughout this long adventure.
I didn't understand the first chapter and the beginning is a bit confusing but other than this every thing else is good .
well it has its interesting parts, but everything happens very fast and there doesn't seem to be any character development, the mc is like that and that's it, they don't show how he prepared himself or what he did, they say he spent some time preparing himself as a teacher but it is mentioned in passing and in another moment he appears with a network of spies and it is also mentioned in passing.
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MC is a lunatic and not the fun kind ..his consistency as a character is 0 ...it's so bad it even pulls GRRM's characters down to his level There are good parts in this but it all buckles under the pressure of this main character , forcing lots of plot holes and contrivances
so far i really enjoy this story there's nothing annoying me which is very good all the characters feel accurate to the lore so far i am very excited to see the rest of the story i really hope the author doesn't drop it like the rest
don't stop writing this masterpiece pls it amazing I can't get enough of it. I just wish he could work more on his magic try and make it more versatile so if he ever gets to dragon fighting level he will be ready like really imagine he's flying in the sky fighting 3 DRAGONS that will be EPIC ps: great job continue the great work and try to not get stressed while writing cuz I don't what you to suddenly drop it
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Man o just found it and still didn't read it yet but before that can you make VAL one of his wife it will benefit him well because he is gonna marry the princess
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Written at chapter 8. So far, it's a good story with some clichรฉs but it's still good. Can I definitely see myself reading more of this. The magic aspect I'm enjoying is that I would ike to see more on the ritual side of things. The only concern I have right now is if it's a harem story cause that could ruin it. WQ 4 SD 4 CD 3 US 5 WB 3
Very nice story More chapter update please ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ I liked the story๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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one of the good works I have read so far so...keep writing and improve i guess
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Sabes fue un poco difรญcil al principio pero conforme seguรญ leyendo me fue gustando mรกs este fic y ver que le dan poco crรฉdito me da rabia no puedo cambiar eso pero espero que entre los 100 comentarios de odio tengas uno que te demuestre que Vaz por buen camimo
a forced story at many points. It even makes you want to read it at the beginning but as you progress the need to swallow the script is very forced... nonsense things, facilities, absurdities and "magic powers" are the last trick to bury the plot.