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MHA Code: Unknown
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Sakamaki Izayoi is bored with his regular life. Quirk Restriction Law doesn't allow normal citizens to use their powers publically. So, on advice he decides to enroll in U.A. High, the most prestigious hero academy to get a license to use his powers freely.
Note: Both MHA and Izayoi Sakamaki are creation of their respective owner.
I wanted to try writing something with Izayoi for long time, he is a overpowered character and not much fanfics about him.
The anime didn't do well for god knows what reason.
TAGS: Strong MC, School life, Superpowers, pranks, Villains, Heroes, My Hero Academia
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Overall while it was intersting to see how Izayoi works in the world of MHA, the pacing of the story really just felt too fast. You mentioned not wanting to write over the top descriptive stories but your story suffers from pacing issues and just how it really doesn't work well combined with the short chapters. Its all about balancing and really it just felt weak as its just Izayoi slapped into MHA without much thought. He doesn't interact with his classmates, we don't really see him much outside of what happens in canon and he is just a tag along who really doesn't bring much to the world. Its just following basic canon.