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The story about a guy transmigration in scott pilgrim vs the world with a system he also travel to other worlds, anime worlds and movies and animation series and and game world.
MC doesn't have a tragic past or anything, he had normal life and had normal problems and then transmigration in the the Scott pilgrim world.
The worlds:
Scott pilgrim world
konosuba world
black clover world
gamer manhwa world.
(More worlds will be added later, he also don't leave a world for another one, he travel between them)
Respective series mentioned are credited to their respective owners, I only got MC and some oc
It's my first time writing and English is not my first language
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Tulis ulasanI finished reading some chapters and I must say it's hateful. He spends the first chapters talking to the system and arguing with himself about how to travel to the multiverse, copy abilities, and become overpowered. He doesn't even explore the first world and he's already off to another one. The interaction with the world is poor, and the dialogues are bad. I didn't like it.
I love your fanfic brother, the only thing I complain about is that your chapters are not longer, you have some errors in your writing but not bad for it being your first time, please keep improving, you have my full support
Well this my fanfic so I give myself 5 star and probably need it I have feelings my first few chapters is bad now I'm New and I hope as Times goes I get better and better leave comments if you read the fanfic I have feelings no is going to read it
Muy buena obra bro, sigue asรญ y por favor no la dejes caer. ยกSe ha convertido en una de mis obras favoritas sin lugar a dudas! Eres increรญble en esto y no te dejes desmotivar. (Recuerda es tu fic y sin dudas tรบ eliges que sucede con el.)
esta ok, no es el mejor fanfic pero tampoco es basura, es entretenido, bueno para pasa el rato, si puedes leelo. 5 estrellas por que no soy critico ni escritor para estar dando opiniones objetivas
Meh.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Muy pronto para dar un reseรฑa objetiva . Pero por el momento me gusta, ademรกs que estaba buscando hace mucho un fanfic de esta historia. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐