As Spiderman in MHA
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Two lives. Two chances. One question:
Can a killer become a hero?
Rei Mizuki spent twenty-eight years as an assassin. Efficiency over morality. Survival over conscience.
Then a warehouse, a trap, and a smile as everything ended.
Except it didn't end.
He woke up fifteen with spider powers in the My Hero Academia world.
Same instincts. Same skills. Different purpose.
Four weeks until the UA entrance exam. He knows what's coming—every villain attack, every tragedy.
He could warn people. Could change everything.
Or he could use that knowledge to become something terrifying.
The timeline's already shifting. His existence is the variable. And when the League of Villains attacks USJ, they'll face a student who fights like a professional.
Cold, Precise, and lethal if necessary.
This isn't the story of a hero.
It's the story of a weapon learning to choose who it protects.
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Read up to ch 5, here's 2 things I don't like and what made me drop it -AI slop, so much dramatization of simple things -Mc is stupid, so many contradictory statements from him, he got reincarnated and wanna become a hero, by applying to UA, but then proceeded to do things that only through plot armor will he avoid consequences btw he also wants to "lay low" then proceeded to go out at night and be a vigilante, even used his very identifiable quirk in front of the public and hero
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The premise of the story is good but limited by the author's ability to properly execute it. The story is filled with redundancies and over emphasis on aspect that should not be detailed. Also the main character power is extremely limited and because of the power level needed to truly matter in the MHA, he is not able to properly make an impact .
I really like the premise and the story is good. the problem is his past life background, 7 chapters in i dont really see anything about him that says used to be an assassin. he acts like someone around high-school age. he doesnt show understanding in his training, life management, and stealth that a assassin who lived life would know already and acts like a prideful teenager. the only other negative I see is that for someone who wants to be low key doing VERY illegal vigilante work with a very recognizable quirk is pretty not well thought out. would be arrested as soon as apply to UA for at minimum questioning. again it is a decent story its just a few background issues that just take away from story
As the author, I'll keep this short and honest. This is my take on "what if an assassin got a second chance in MHA with Spider-Man's powers?" I'm focusing on realistic character growth, slow-burn development, and a protagonist who doesn't have all the answers. Rei isn't your typical hero, and that's the point. He's learning, adapting, and figuring out who he wants to be in this second life. If you're looking for: Grounded progression (no instant OP) Strategic fights over power-ups A different perspective on the MHA world Slow-burn romance (way later) Then give it a shot! Important Note: Rei is growing stronger slowly and realistically within the MHA universe's power scaling. This isn't a 1:1 copy of comic book Spider-Man who lifts tons at 15. He's working within MHA's Quirk system and biological limits. His strength will grow over time through training and development. Updates will be consistent. I'm in this for the long haul. Thanks for reading!
I tried, really, but the inconsistencies with the ranking and the MC's monotone and robotic one liner thoughts, are just too much. The idea is amazing and I know it works because I have seen other fics apply the same but here, it just doesn't click. A mysterious character appears in his training area, somehow gets a hold of his contact information and summons him for a spar (stranger danger, btw) and all his supposed training as an assassin goes out the window and he fights like a bruiser. His hero points are little over half of Izuku's when his way of doing things is much more efficient and doesn't leave him crippled. His placement after the assessment is below the physically weaker classmates... Things are just too inconsistent with what is expected through the context, at this point the only thing that saves this review is the update schedule, because even the other dialogues/interactions feel forced and robotic... Wanted to reach the USJ, but couldn't make it that far. Might try at a later date when I have recovered from whatever this is I just read.
Good plot line and theme but the character is too wanna hide in the shadows type
ai slop, contradictory character,mc doesn't act like the assassin he should be and it's cringe, spider man's powers are cool(not represented well)
Everything was great until the author added a mysterious person out of nowhere that changed the MC to suddenly act stupid with a forced introduction that made absolutely no sense and introduced supposed "weaknesses" in his fighting skills which weren't there at all and it is so frustrating that it's triggering my anger issues so I can't continue to read this story. It is soon frustrating that I can't even bring myself to read till he gets to UA because I feel I'll throw my phone in rage. Honestly i hate to rag on a writer as I know it's hard to write, but tbh if I could give this a negative review I would, that's how mad I am
It's just bad. Especially mc. Author tells us he's a super cool assassin or something. But he constantly making stupid mistakes and just acts like an idiot. I gave up on a fight with a girl. That was just brain dead. An actual smart kid could win this fight, but mc somehow lost. Because he just doesn't like to think, I guess. I don't know why author made mc so stupid. I understand that it's easier to write about someone who just learn things, it's also probably more satisfying to read about such things like training arcs, learning how to fight etc. But if you want the story to be like this then make mc an oc kid. Or kid that died and reincarnated into mha. It would not save us from the most stupid moments but would explain most of them.
The plot and the idea of the story is good. However, the execution is just… not the best. Its mostly AI. Its noticable from how it is written and the constant mistakes. Characters seemed to have been dumber and nerfed.(Iida during the entrance test, Jirou somehow not hearing mc but mc can hear Jirou, etc). Mc’s thoughts are also kinda annoying. He knows whats gonna happen but when it happens he acts like he didnt know about it. Then his abilities, likely depends on the plot. At the quirk test, he performed well, but somehow got 15th place. Then on the duo battle, he somehow is able to hear Jirou’s heartbeat, while Jirou, who literally has a hearing quirk can’t even hear mc’s footsteps/crawling. Its like the abilities and how strong the characters are will change to accommodate the plot. Overall, I really like the idea, but not how it is executed.
Here’s a basic story. If you like ChatGPT-style writing and don’t mind it, this one’s for you.
... There go 5 minutes of my life that I'll never get back. I read upto the 4th chapter... I couldn't bring myself to continue further, it was like an assault on my eyes. After banging my head against the pillow, I finally decided to do my good deed for the day, which consisted of trying to warn anyone else away from this utter trash. Stop using AI author, and please oh please... go take a course on writing or something. What you're doing is the equivalent of a middle-schooler opening a street food stall and proceeding to poison most of his customers due to sheer incompetence.
Y'all I was excited to read this. I read the summary and the first chapter and I was locked in. Then it started talking about his strength. Okay the MC is a bit weak but he can get stronger. Then they introduced that one random ass character, nerfed the MC and repeated the same "Why do you want to go to UA/be a hero" conversation 3 times with the exact same person. This could have been so good but the author completely forgets their own characters background. MC does not act like a 28 year old assassin with years of experience. He's continuously dumbed down and that detracts from his character. My advice? Don't bother reading this, it's a waste of time. It's nowhere near as good as the summary makes it out to be.
Too much Gary Stu, and I don't like that kind of story. Despite the author insisted that the MC like to being low-key, yet he hogged all achievements by relying in his "past" experience and knowing the canon story. It's not that I against people over 30s or 40s reading comics as hobby, but for assassin that simply like watching anime like most weebs is incomprehensible and illogical for me.
Read upto 28 chapters. The mc was a bit of a airhead in the early chapters, but now it's looking good. Currently the sports festival is going on. I hope the author makes the mc op. waiting for the fight, Rei vs todoroki to come (hopefully)
looking forward to what happens next. There are mistakes but the story is interesting, Don't drop it. I hope the Chapters keep coming. Do fix the mistakes. All the best!
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so far I like it, the way it's written makes it very comfortable to read. Eagerly awaiting the following chapters. It would be fun to see him in a situation where he has to use a weapon and people question how proficient he is with them despite his quirk. tbh my first worry was how Eraser would have reacted to him, but so far is consistent, but a tiny little mild for someone as thorough like him. Anyways, great job, a good read so far.
Please, someone gouge my eyes out. Reading this was a very bad decision. Guys, if you still have an ounce of common sense, stay away from this patience-draining death trap. The author thinks we're all stüpid and he's intelligent, so the protagonist is clearly a catastrophic and highly contradictory disaster.