Building a Monster Nation From Zero in Another World

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craftybacon08

have you ever Isekaied with your life on the line

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HopingToBeIsekaied

The story have a great premise but is heavily AU. I can handle that. The only other thing I have to complain is that the story severely hyperboling Tensura and extremely underestimate other fic worlds. Like come-on, its true that magicules concentration are very important in Tensura but that's ONLY in Tensura worldview. He's travelling beyond that of Tensura so using Tensura laws to judge other worlds seems like judging that arctic is hot because the desert you have lived in your whole life is hot. Pokemon world being weak because they don't have magicules kinda ticks me off in the wrong way.

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Ancientdatiost_014

raw brother? .. ... .. . .. ..

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The_Dark_Hydrax

Came here from another one of your books.

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Mindlessreader25

One of the best author's on webnovel! I hope this novel turns out very good...and author I will ask the usual questions...will this novel have harem? If so how many members will be there...(i don't want exact numbers, just a round figure)...And thanks for the novel🤝

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Santy_Melay

For God's sake, bro, another shitty novel about traveling between worlds. Can't the authors think of anything else? Because if it's not that, it's dimensional chats, or the heroines listening to their inner voices.

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Assaiah

I left when the MC said he could analyze root(nasuverse)due to his Great sage like skill, like dawg what do you mean analyze it, its whole existence is something that even nothingness can't describe, wut are you gonna analyze?and the author kept on glazing tensura to no end, i mean i get it's strong but no where near higher tier franchises,felt like I am reading a tensura fanboy at work who can't wait to glaze it.

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Javier_Graneros

La historia me gustó, el protagonista hace buen uso de sus poderes y me gusta que el autor tenga consciencia de la diferencia entre mundos, equilibrando los niveles de poder, la adquisición de habilidades y experiencia, espero que siga así de interesante, son solo 17 capítulos hasta ahora.

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Lolggloll_XD

I hope this story will not be abandoned....................................................................................................................................................................... .............

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YuriinHaremIsNTR

The story was great, but the way you compared the power on tensura to pokemon is honestly hilarious lol. That by just breaking a tree on tensura you can one shot Rayquaza? Really bro? C'mon... You can Dickride it 24/7 if you want but please... Make it sense at least...

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JustDefy

Okay, I'm only to chapter 9 and the horrible world balancing is already sh*t to me. The writing quality is whack. And the multiverse trope is long since played out. Anyone know if this every gets better?

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histidine

too much tensura glazing, the author is obviously a fan. as the author he is entitled to make that world shine a bit more than it should but he completely missed the mark here by making it so overpowered.

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AdamFlores

Read the raw from a Chinese website...And I have to say, it's definitely a good Tensura fanfiction. The MC is smart, and the harem is quite reasonable- the powers are also well developed. My only complaint is about these higher dimensionality and lower dimensionality bs....I'd rather this fanfiction not have the premise of a normal person from the Tensura world being able to destroy cities in a world that is dimensionally lower

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Boundless_creator

I came here from labyrinth construction fanfic.

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asparagus_21

Good novel. i hope author include the world of death march it's a good novel and I barely see that in fanfiction. sorry I'm not good at English.

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Alex_167

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bennett_verse

I was completely absorbed in your story, it’s cinematic and emotionally charged in all the right ways. The atmosphere you build is incredible. As an artist who takes commissions on comic/webtoon adaptation, I couldn’t help but imagine how visually stunning it could be. Every scene feels storyboarded already. If that interests you, I’d love to talk on Instagram (@eve_verse_) or Discord (bennett_lol).

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VuksO_Sid

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famz_l

is this fanfic have a lemon?.,.,.,.,.,..