Dream of The Beginning

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Ventura

I'll be sincere, the story is pretty interesting, but the whole "Kanade" is just a HUGE turn down and big friking NOPE for me, I wont say is NTR but it's of bad taste. I feel the story would be a lot better with that. For those that don't mind it, the novel will be pretty interesting.

LV 5

Dfransginola

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LV 2

Arthur_D_Pendragon

author hasn't added the tag but don't read if you are disgusted by the explicit notorare elements in the fic... ..............................................

LV 3

Ero_Tenshi

This was actually a decent fate ff, i expect the author to not drop this story ..................................................................................................................................................

LV 3

12HCL

it was good at first bad when too much maiham happened ntr and losing skills that you worked hard for get tricked even when having mystic eyes being betrayed over and over it's a wast bad ending one don't read

LV 2

Kaniion

It was an interesting story, but after what was shown about Kanade I dropped it, the author should say the story had that kind of content in the synopsis, a lot of people find it unpleasant.

LV 4

Na1gel

just so you know i copied this comment so its not mine but i agree with everything he says in this ....this is about kanade one of the main girls in the story lol ...... first, she was getting close with him and mc got closer to her too it's like by the normal (webnovel plot) gonna be a start of a happy relationship, then just bam she started sleeping with his friends and got raped by her father and then got converted to a tragic heroine and his friend knew that they were close she said it too (later we got to know she was acting) but his friend knew that and got off on it too that's why I also said explicit notorare means explicitly and many people don't like this kind of storyline and I don't too when the girls close to mc with some romantic plot start getting raped and sleeping with his friends

LV 10

Requiem_Soul

What a disgusting thing to put in this novel.

LV 13

happy_sad

You know why Disgusting féçķ 夢のつづき追いかけていたはずなのに 曲がりくねった細い道人につまずく あの頃みたいにって戻りたい訳じゃないの 無くしてきた空を探してる わかってくれますように犠牲になったような 悲しい顔はやめてよ 罪の最後は淚じゃないよずっと苦しく背負ってくんだ 出口見えない感情迷路に誰を待ってるの? 白いノ一トに綴ったようにもっと素直に吐き出したいよ 何から 逃れたいんだ 現実ってやつ? 叶えるために 生きてるんだって 忘れちゃいそうな 夜の真ん中 無難になん てやってられないから 帰る場所もないの この想いを消してしまうには まだ人生長いでしょ? 懐くしくなる こんな痛みも歓迎じゃん 謝らなくちゃいけないよね、あー、 ごめんね うまく言えなくて心配かけたままだったね あの日かかえた全部あしたかかえる全部 順番つけたりはしないから わかってくれますようにそっと目を閉じたんだ 見たくないものまで見えんだもん いらない噂にちょっと 初めて聞く発言どっち 向かい合ったら友達だって 嘘はやめてね 深いハートが苛立つ様に体ん中燃えているんだ ホントは 期待してんの 現実ってやつ? 叶えるために生きてるんだって 叫びたくなるよ聞こえていますか? 無難になんてやってられないから 帰る場所もないの 優しさには いつも感謝してる だから強くなりたい 進むために 敵も味方も歓迎じゃん どうやって次のドア開けるんだっけ? 考えてる? もう引き返せない物語始まってるんだ 目を覚ませ、目を覚ませ この想いを消してしまうには まだ人生長いでしょ? やり残してるコトやり直してみたいから もう一度ゆこう 叶えるために 生きてるんだって 叫びたくなるよ聞こえていますか? 無難になんて やってられないから 帰る場所もないの 優しさには いつも感謝してる だから強くなりたい 懐かしくなる こんな痛みも歓迎じゃん

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LV 5

asssssshhole

overall, this story is good.... fate with somelike multiverse travel in future. there is "no NTR" in this fanfic, since there was no romantic relationship between mc and kanade. mc has system, but there was no quest-system. also mc has brain. in the end,,,, if youre like mc with good brain, fanfic with realistic version of typemoon well this fanfic for you. but if youre like story with romance+grab them all "waifu", dont read this book.

LV 3

Vitrialia_Amermes

bla33 many comments was funny I see , mc have reality warping okay and kanade was posse by some evil goddess so that not her that's do ntr to mc and even mc was a little understand more than you ( he even use his power to make new kanade and yet she choice to reincarnated in new world because she knew that's she didn't deserve love of mc )

LV 2

Arlekin01

NTR...................................................................................................................... Jdnfkdbdkdnwkdbdnxjdjdbdjfjfjishfb

LV 6

Nyx_Celeste

I vouched for the author to return his works. This is truly a HIDDEN Fate fanfic. Ignore the nonsense being spouted by those in the old comment section. Once you passed this part, the story gets better later on. This is one of those rare case in which the Sixth Magic, a supposed theory is truly the most overpowered magic in Nasuverse.

LV 4

AngelYC145

I have deemed this fanfic as............ ....................... ....................... ....................... ....................... ....................

LV 4

Fly_you_fools

This story is good but fixing the grammatical errors will even make this even better, now I’m going say this, there are some reviews here that say there is NTR here, no there isn’t. The mc doesn’t love Kanade, he has NO feelings for her. (Also hope that there will be more updates, please)

LV 4

emiya

This was actually a decent fate ff, i expect the author to not drop this story ..................................................................................................................................................

LV 6

A_tired_immortal

there no ntr if someone who want to read this , they just fast conclusion after all . If they read a few chapter more , author already say she was a villian and her personality like to collect men and act innocent . Plus her power kind of bug so this like early villian for mc to face , other that comment about NTR was funny , I mean they want mc add women that have reverse harem into his harem??? and netorare it's like ( two of them need to have kiss ,s&x or etc that couple do then when suddenly she got r@p3 or something similar than that's it's Netorare for you )

LV 3

Vitrialia_Amermes

uwu , I just comment this to make the rating if this go up a litter . Thought it's funny why I care about this ?? maybe because the story was good but I don't want this story end so fast like that

LV 3

Vitrialia_Amermes

there no ntr if someone who want to read this , they just fast conclusion after all . If they read a few chapter more , author already say she was a villian and her personality like to collect men and act innocent . Plus her power kind of bug so this like early villian for mc to face , other that comment about NTR was funny , I mean they want mc add women that have reverse harem into his harem??? and netorare it's like ( two of them need to have kiss ,s&x or etc that couple do then when suddenly she got r@p3 or something similar than that's it's Netorare for you )