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Evolving My Undead Legion In A Game-Like World
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“Is this a game or reality?” - Michael Norman
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Apocalypse descended, and reality transformed into a game for a select few known as Awakeners.
Between the ages of 16 and 18, every teenager had the chance to awaken a class and attain supernatural powers. Awakeners would then venture into a game-like world, the Land of Origin, seeking treasures and gaining tremendous strength.
Michael transmigrated into this world at 18 and successfully awakened the Necromancer class. However, that was not all—Michael also unlocked a unique talent that allowed his undead summons to evolve infinitely.
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[Little Skeleton has successfully evolved into Skeleton Soldier!]
[Skeleton Mage has successfully evolved into Skeleton Summoner!]
[Bone Dragon has successfully evolved into Undead Frost Dragon!]
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With his powerful undead summons, Michael set out on a path to become a supreme legend.
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#Undead
#Evolution
#Armybuilding
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I can’t stop reading. This book has so much potential and especially after Volume One everything starts to pick up speed. Believe me countine to read until you read a little bit of Volume Two before dropping. I really hope this book doesn’t get dropped.
This story has potential to be great. The world building is better than most stories on this app while leaving some questions about the true nature of the world. However, I am pretty disappointed in the free chapters of the story. There was too much exposition in places where it was inappropriate, such as right before or after battles. The size of chapters are pretty short too, which means the majority of the chapter is filled with lots of information that doesn’t really matter at the moment. The author had a chance to show us the world that awakeners enter, showing us struggle, mistakes, and ultimately triumph. Instead we get two fights with some slimes and then a couple more monsters are quickly killed of screen before he goes back home. I get that the first volume was supposed to be slow, but it felt like almost nothing important happened. We still know nothing of his skills or talent. I can’t see myself coming back to spend money on this story if it stays like this.
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story's not bad but author is definitely pushing a ton of filler and repeating things to up chapter prices slimy behavior at its finest. also the character was supposed reincarnated after making to his 20s but acts extremely immature and lacks forsight 🙄
Characters and setting seem to be well fleshed out,though with odd, somewhat justifable hiccups. Power scaking and growth of the mc is acceptable. What really kills the story is the writers habit to either ramble on in a circle and often repeat information. Perhaps in later chapters the writer will learn to right more fluidly, I, unfortunately will not be there to read it. This work does not deserve a ranking spot on the golden ticket list.
I really, really like this novel and think it has incredible potential but it also has a pretty glaring problem that's seriously hurting it for many people. One of its biggest flaws is that something that could be easily and succinctly done in 2 chapters is more often than not stretched out to encompass at least 5 or more chapters by the author using filler, for seemingly no reason but to artificially slow things down. Combine that with the extreme over explanations of things that either don't need to be explicitly explained for one reason or another for the audience to naturally understand it, or are about things that feel misplaced and aren't relevant to that moment, the short term plot, near future or even overall story for a long time to come but is explained in excruciating detail anyway right then and there, putting the whole plot and story on hold until the info dump is over, many times happening several times a chapter and often repeating the same exact info just one or two chapters later without changing anything about it, just a complete copy/paste from before. Further add on the seemingly endless (and mostly off topic) tangents he goes into before, during and after he does anything at all, but especially especially so for fights, meaning he'll need several chapters to kill a low level mob (like a slime) because he's spends so much time on random superfluous tangents that 90% of the buildup and aftermath is just the MC yapping about nothing and repeating the same thoughts and reflections he's already had many times so far, without actually learning from these reflections and needing to go through the same thought processes over again to relearn the conclusion you already came to multiple times before, repeating the steps every 10 chapters or so. Plus the stats and descriptions of things are very often repeated multiple chapters in a row without changing anything, leading to between 30%-40% of a chapter can relatively often be nothing but the same info said in the previous chapter(s), and with the size of each chapter it only feels that much shorter with all the filler and repeats. It kinda feels like if you were to reedit the novel and it's chapters, you could probably remove around 40% of the words and reader would still have the same amount of info and knowledge of the world, the plot and the MC as you would get reading the original novel, only with less filler and faster/(debatably)better pacing Don't get me wrong though because i truly do like this and i know this makes it sound really bad but i do strongly believe others should give it a chance and try it for themselves, i just want it to improve, get better and eventually become one of the all time goats of a story (like "the second coming of gluttony" for example) like it so clearly has the potential to be if its a bit more edited and trimmed down.
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Almost 200 chapters in and less then 10 days have passed. Where do you wanna take this story at this pace? Maybe instead of adding all the action in a single day, spread it out a bit? This has so much potential but you're slowly killing it with unnecessary padding.
story and everything is good but OMG author loves to copy paste a lot there are time the entire chapter is either copy paste from before or extremely unnecessary detail on some random matters , in general when you decide to read this be ready to skip at least 60% of the text you see
The story is interesting so far but there is too much filler in the chapters. Also the chapters are short, so sometimes feels somewhat anoying having to read 7 chapters just for something that in 3 chapters could be done and it would be as good as doing in 7 chapters. Webnovel is not cheap for reading. Quality does not consist of oversaturating with details that do not interest. But as i say the story is interesting so good job and keep going, this just how it feels for me
interesting theme lots of potential however repeating of the same information makes it difficult to enjoy the book. Can take 2 - 5 chapters to see progress in the storyline.
Enjoyable read but there are a lot of problems 1. Story is very slow. 440 chapters in and only three months have passed in the story. 2. Author explains every little thing the mc does, every little thought he has and adds a lot of unnecessary detail. I get that the author wants to create a almost real feel to the story and cast but most people like myself end up skipping past alot and end up missing key details because they were mixed in with unnecessary stuff. I would say 30% of the writing is unnecessary which is quite a lot. 3. The mc personality. He is way too careful, he uses his summons for everything and doesn’t think about raising his own power or using his own power much. He always second guesses his own power and doesn’t fight himself very much. I get that it’s a necromancy book but he doesn’t need to use his summons to kill everything. The summoner should always be more powerful than his summons. It doesn’t make sense for his summons to be stronger than him and as a reader it makes it less enjoyable. The MC is Michael, not his undead. 4. The world building is awful. 440 chapters in and even though 30% of the story is filled with nonsense we still don’t know anything about the world. For example we don’t about the other cities, we don’t know much about the academy, we don’t know about other stronger awakeners, we don’t know about other countries, let alone other realms etc There are a lot more I could go on and on about but I won’t. At this rate this novel will easily surpass 4000 chapters. This Novell is way too detailed when it doesn’t need to be. Honestly the whole lionheart kingdom arc has been boring to read. The only enjoyable parts have been when the mc gets a power boost. Other than that I’ve found myself skipping a lot of the novel.
Unfortunately chapter 211 is where I stop. The story itself isn’t bad it’s actually really entertaining but before that you have to get past the info dumps and the yapping that the author loves doing even tho he said he would stop. The story is super slow. And most times I’m fine with slow but this is beyond that. I’m fine with the power scaling pace it’s just the story itself. And then on top of that for someone that’s supposed to be strong Micheal tends to humbles himself and makes himself more street-level even though he should be able to accomplish more stuff faster and easier because of his power which is super annoying to me. The last thing is because of how street level he makes himself, it makes him more soft. having morals is fine but sometimes his moral gets in the way him getting more power when the situation isn’t even morally questionable.. especially for a necromancer
A very good and planned book with excellent writing quality, however it is very slow paced, which is good in the beginning to get an understanding of what the book is about, but what is crazy and hilarious about the book, is that the author clearly stated that the book would be more fast paced after chapter 50, and I can say there is no difference at all it has been 100 chapters and it has been four days in the book, it is pretty crazy in my world, and I feel that the author over describes somethings in the novel, I'm wondering if when it's been 10 days in the book, we've reached chapter 500???? But if you enjoy a slow-paced book with a lot of information about everything, I recommend this one for you. I'm sorry but i drop here maybe will comeback to read it on a site that has it free.....
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Common concept but could be interesting if done well. Sadly mc has awful intelligence and doesn’t think proactively, instead only reacting reactively. One example was the mc spending an entire day on a forum for awakeners, and within this time did not stop to think to look for any information regarding his class. In fact it didn’t even cross his mind….. why? I don’t know. Another example is him buying a pistol without actually trying to learn how to use it. The world he’s in puts so much effort into looking after awakeners and yet they don’t even supposedly give training grounds for one of the most common transitional weapons? Really? It’s either that or the mc actually didn’t look for one, which is hilarious. His ways of killing monsters is also pretty funny. He literally just goes in all guns blazing with no strategic thought, and in the process gets injured and misses 90% of all bullets. Only 20 chapters ish in and already the mc has made me lose my marbles. Tldr: mc refuses to look for knowledge that helps him and instead waits for him to nearly die multiple times for him to start thinking basic thoughts. Rinse and repeat for many chapters along with pointless info dumps and chapter structure that screams ai and what you’ve got is trash. Yippee!
Very good but too slow. I read 70 chapters but the story has been going on just 3 days Please fix it. It's a shame to ruin such a good story with this.
Positives: The story is interesting and i enjoy the evolution system. The two worlds thing has potential and the different undead are a nice touch. Negatives: The pacing is just horrible, there is no need to explain every single thing in such detail and please stop praising the mc about everything, we get it, he is the best. Many comments are about the pacing and unnecessary details, just listem to the readers, or this novel will die a slow death.
This novel has a really good concept and worldbuilding. However, the pacing is really slow. Like really slow. I'm at chapter 326, and the story is still at around 2 months in universe. We're not even close to reaching the academy that has been mentioned since early chapters
The story is fun and has great potential, but the excessive speculations and unnecessary info ruin the experience. Aside from that, it's a comparably good book.
great story with good character development. I am excited for every new release. There Is just one thing that Is not so good and that Is over explanations, dear author se are not stupid. Story progression Is great a I am all for slow stories but that Is with relevant side stories or some interesting gimick. MC loosing in his thoughts Is not interesting side gimick. overall great novel
story seems to have a lot of potential, not fast-paced, which is a good thing. As seen to many of these stories, just shoot off and lose all integrity. it is my hope this book stays on the good path and has many chapters ahead of it.