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In A Cultivation World With The Highest Talent
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Good Cultivation fic. Well done. The best part is MC taking the Aizen route. Lord Aizen would be amused. 5
so the first 25 or so chapters are okay, but the second the science and other random naruto stuff was added it just plummeted down hill
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There are huge mistakes. In the first episode, mc dies at the computer and is born with the system he wrote. He doesn't think he's in any virtual reality, then he's a software developer, why doesn't he try the system? Also, he never questions his situation. It's like translation. It's like I'm reading a Chinese novel
Author if ur grammar and etc is not good write the story, then paste it on Chatgpt. Com and tell the A. I to correct everything with ur story. It will do gramme, right paragraph spacing, cultural context etc and give u a percect copy. Plz think about it
too boring with no attachment to story , a guy died got system (without any explanation ) , get points by people emotions , buy stuff , more he buys the expensive other things got ( that were cheaper before but proceeds to buy random s*t ) , i don't remember any conversations or monologue. this guys and story doesn't feel right to me . no good characters other than MC . system and his deeds are boring . there was nothing that annoyed me , but i felt bored .
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well, I will be honest here, this book has good concept but it is executed very poorly. the author has written many novels but the grammar is still unbearable, so if you don't wanna lose your braincells, don't read this.
La historia parece que pasa rosando lo cliche pero su trama esta mucho mejor explicada que en otras novelas y su escritura es de nivel god, te deja atrapado en la historia haciendo que quieras más, rogemos que esta novela no se vaya a premium esto es oro
It is an interesting fanfic, the grammar is readable, the story seems a bit cliché, however, it has many points in it that differentiate it from the common ones and that make me want to keep reading more and more, the protagonist is not bad, being smarter than average, the other characters also have their own differentiations, so far, I'm quite entertained and really enjoying the story, it has a lot of potential and hopefully the author won't spoil it.
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It is an interesting fanfic, the grammar is readable, the story seems a bit cliché, however, it has many points in it that differentiate it from the common ones and that make me want to keep reading more and more, the protagonist is not bad, being smarter than average, the other characters also have their own differentiations, so far, I'm quite entertained and really enjoying the story, it has a lot of potential and hopefully the author won't spoil it.
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Fanfic molto bella,affascinante e Piena di potenziale non vedo l'ora del seguito e di così stia preparando l'autore....spero che continui così.
IT seems interesting i Hope you will continue as the concept and the story is very good, grammar can be bad but i read worse. I love the story
This here is a masterpiece, a work from the gods. It like someone gave a donkey a pen and said 'wright on this phone.' it will bring you to tears at how horrib... I mean, how good the grammar is, that donkey did a good job.