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My Virtual Girlfriend Is Actually a Lady From the Richest Family
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David rarely interacts with women in real life other than his older sister.
However, online, he has a virtual girlfriend who wants a more serious relationship.
When his virtual girlfriend claims to be a lady from the Rothschild Family, he begins to wonder if his life will be okay from now on.
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I love it. keep up the amazing work. the more I read the more I want to continue.
Writing quality is good, just author does go Gender Pronoun challenged regularly. Story Development for me is lack luster as the whole story now is all about throwing girls at the MC. His interactions with the ladies is sub-par and very basic.. No decent banter, women just fall to him instantly, and it is one right after the other starting around chapter 80-90. The title is about Jane and David, yet since beyond the first few chapters they are separated 80% of the story. The way the interact it feels more like an arranged marriage than a 3 year online relationship. Character Development: Jane is MIA most of the story not sure.. David has turned Literally into Zeus as he just wants to stick his stick in everything. Every confrontation he turns into "HULK SMASH" . World Background - Honestly University is a waste of time they should just drop it as it is pointless. It is full of Young Master mentality, but is Earth so pretty standard... I batch unlocked to 140ish so will read till then, but won't be continuing.
i don't know about the story but i am going to add it to reading list. i will come back once there are more chapters (300-400)
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Story development and writing quality is good. There are a few grammatical mistakes but it doesn't affect much. GIVE IT A TRY!
First review for the novel , will update after reading more.Keep the good work Mr.Author~~
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I’ve read the authors other novel, the ‘I can peak’ one and I can say that the starting quality of this one is much better. Don’t get me wrong his other nove is also good, but the level of weiting in this seems much higher. I haven’t gotten very far, because locked chapters started pretty early, but from what I’ve read it will be good. The story hasn’t been fully set-up yet, and you can see that the setting is being slowly given to the reader. Character design is pretty good aswell, though honestly it you say someone has large breast, that doesn’t really describe much. (At least I don’t remember seeing any descriptions other than the normal ones, hair/color, skin tone… etc) as I said before the world hasn’t really been fully completed yet, but it is pretty obvious that this is on earth, i. Modern day setting. Seems like this is just our world, but the view behind the veil to see super powers. Good luck to the author, it’s lookin great so far.