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Naruto: Being a Shinobi with no System But...
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Transmigrated to a 'Civilian' Senju Shinobi - Check
No System - Check
Realistic Progression - Check
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A unique fanfic is just Wow, cool. Firstly, the main character is not crazy, + the main character is a normal, ordinary guy, + most importantly, realism, and immersion in the story is amazing. In my opinion, you can add a couple more little details. 18+. I'm not eager to write such scenes, but to show that he woke up after 18+ after sex, next to a naked girl, etc. Little things, but it will add realism. Also, give other little details of ordinary life, add chapters of ordinary life, like meeting Might Guy, everyday affairs. I advise you to read this, you will not regret it. I'm waiting for new chapters. I'm waiting, waiting, waiting, I give 5 stars.
I’ve read hundreds of Naruto fanfictions, honestly, there isn’t a single one with more than fifty chapters that I haven’t at least tried. At the very least, I always read the first chapter before deciding whether it’s worth my time. Normally, I’m not the type to leave reviews or rate stories. But this time… I just have to make an exception. This story blew past every expectation I had. It’s easily the best Naruto fanfiction I’ve come across on this entire site—no contest. Everything about it felt just right. The main character is exceptional: realistic, grounded, and not driven by those childish fantasies that ruin so many other stories in the genre. The supporting and original characters are written with real care and attention. They act exactly as they should—true to their canon personalities—so much so that I never once felt anything was off. The narration is consistently strong, smooth, and immersive. If I had to point out one weakness, it would be the battle descriptions—but even that gets noticeably better as the story goes on. All in all, this is the kind of story that reminds you why you started reading fanfiction in the first place.
Damn, I have to admit, this is one of the best Naruto Fanfic or fanfic I've ever read, This novel brings a simple but deep story, the author really knows how to describe his character from the beginning, even the canon character Itachi feels real, not only that, the storyline runs smoothly and also describes the story from the perspective of the MC which I really acknowledge, and also the development of other characters feels very real, not just as a show or a passing background. I really really like this novel, this is one of the Fanfic or reading materials that I've been looking for, I just hope the author doesn't stop this novel, or I'll really have a headache looking for good reading material.
For now it’s quite good, i’m excited to see where it goes in the future. I hope this continues being a plausible way for a no cheat ninja to grow and potentially reach the summit
I hope it doesn't fall, it has a lot of potential. ................................................................... ...................................................................
Someone know the RAW? ............................................................................................................................................
A really nice novel, I like the more emotionally mature MC and the way he treat his team. I do really hope that he is able to establish the senju name once again with Mokuton
The story progress so far is very good. ..........................................................................................................................
Pretty good first 3 chapters. It’s be nice to be introduced further/know more about the main character in further chapters.
One of the best fics out there no silly system, no op golden finger and not a rushed mess. The only thing I have an issue with is the MC's passivity. His idgaf attitude is grating and I would love it if in the future it came back to bite him in the ass
One Star Review until he updates Naruto: Transmigrated as an Uchiha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great read really like it just curious is this your own work or translated by someone else if it’s translated what’s it called and if your own work I’m really impressed.
The story starts of slow but picks up around c50. The earlier chapters are required to set the tone of the novel. The MC is pragmatic considering his bloodline. Overall 7/10 as of c72.
Hi! I just wanted to say that your story completely drew me in, it’s got such great energy and cinematic flow. I’m a comic artist who works on commissions, and reading your story gave me so many visual ideas. If you’d ever be interested in a comic adaptation or even just chatting about how it could look, I’d love to connect. You can reach me on Discord (@Bennet_lol) or Instagram (@eve_verse).
I Hope this continue the story start simple. yet i hope the development stabilized. i hope the mc suffer yet also gain something. lose and win this kinda thing is better than OP mc
Your story has this rare balance of tension and elegance. It’s visual, heartfelt, and completely immersive. I'm a commissioned artist and specialize in comics and webtoons, and your writing instantly sparked ideas for how it could unfold in illustrated form. If you’re open to the idea, you can reach me on Instagram (@eve_verse_) or Discord (bennett_lol).
Finally a well written Naruto fanfiction without those illogical and biased takes on OG characters. The MC is also very relatable and logical with his goals and ambitions. The best thing for me is how he doesn't have a cheat or system which doesn't show any real growth, and only used to make those Mc's Op. Although he has wood release and a solid foundation because of senju birth, he is not following or copying others ( Hashirama for wood release technique), instead developing his own Wood release technique and sage mode through repeated tests and failures. Found and gold! a solid 5 star from me bro. Keep Cooking 🔥!!