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In the hidden village of Konoha, Naruto carries a monumental secret, a hidden intelligence lurking behind his mischievous grin. Yet, he bides his time, waiting for the perfect moment to change averything.
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I'm not going to lie, it has one of the best stores I've seen in naruto fanfiction. ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
I am so excited for this one it has everything I want in fanfic . And special the MC of this fanfic he's soo smart and kind of has this cold logic, not goffy and naive like the other MC from other fanfics.
Sorry, but I can't continue. The writing and narration method is good, and the length of the chapter is also appropriate, and the secondary characters also feel alive in them. They are not just side characters, but they have their depth and meaning just like the mc. The only thing that I do not like and that makes me leave it is that Naruto, despite his suffering for me 12 years of injustice and insults from the village. He did not leave it and leave just because after he became a genin and with the help of the Hokage and Kakashi who silenced the villagers, he no longer had a problem staying. In the canon, Naruto was influenced by Asura chakra, so he was very naive and had no problem. To stay, but here he is smart and not affected by Asura chakra, so it is not reasonable for him to stay in the village after being subjected to injustice for 12 years since his birth just because after he finally gained strength, the villagers could no longer harm him and the Hokage prevented them from disturbing him, but To give the author his due, this is my fair assessment of the novel in my opinion Writing quality 5/5 Update stability 5/5 Story development 2/5 because of what I talked about above Character design 5/5 World wallpaper 5/5
A smart Naruto give you a happy fan. Just hope you won't have him make any stupid decisions. The story is great so far and hope it continues to be that say
very good start, I like smart naruto. just don't make him naive. โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค
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While I was engrossed in the story at the start.. I'm losing interest since Naruto easily outs himself to various characters and then they take advantage of his abilities and skills he constantly reveals to them. He doesn't really act sneakily or as the synopsis or namesake would have you think. He's so "understanding" of these characters who originally forsook or barely did anything for him until he started showing value(which he easily reveals to them even along wifh the fact that he could careless about the village and would leave if he could). That being said the writing quality is good and the world background seems solid for a naruto fanfic.
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I didnโt like the story at all, not even a little bit. But the author did a good job writing it, keep it up ๐
i honestly can't wait for more chapters. every time one releases, I read it instantly and am left craving for more. this so far is turning out to be one of, in my opinion, one of the best Naruto fan fics. keep it up!!!
One of the best Naruto mcโs Iโve seen, not a reincarnator btw just a different version of Naruto thatโs smarter and stronger and overall more competent. Very good start to the story, and it didnโt really get worse yet as of chapter 30. Itโs great so far, hope it continues
Love the concept and hope the cover isn't just there to look cool but an actual form he'll train and get in the future. Keep up the good work author-san!!!
Itโs a good story, I like this version of Naruto. Just try to not make him too edge lord.
Finally something good. Very underated and one of the best naruto fanfics I've read. Good plot, character developmentand story building. The writing quality is also very good with long chapters.
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