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Slave to Reality
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A catgirl escapes from slavery in her fantasy world to the real world and must learn everything from scratch.
Vivian is a catgirl, born in a world in which all beast-kin are considered as nothing more than intelligent animals and are kept as slaves. Her new owner horribly abuses her, but eventually with the help of a friend she manages to escape, and while running for her life she passes through a portal to the real world. There she finds herself trapped in the apartment of young man who must be a powerful mage, considering all the impressive artifacts he possesses, and who kindly teaches her his language and his world.
Volume 1 Is about falling into and escaping from abuse. The story gets lighter afterwards.
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"Please, master, don't do this. I'm your sister!"
"Animals and people can't be family! Besides, even if they could, we're not related by blood. Now take off you clothes and get on the bed!"
"No!"
"Fine, it's you who's asking for punishment."
"AAARGH!"
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"Vivian, even if my world was filled with beautiful cat girls and bunny girls, and every other kind of beast-kin, you'd still be the only one for me. Will you marry me?"
"Yes!"
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"How much for the orange-haired beauty?"
"She's not for sale."
"How about for rent, then? How much for a night?"
"She's not for rent, either."
"Come on, you can't expect to walk in here with property like this and not share!"
"Vivian, this man is annoying me. Please get rid of him."
"Yes master!"
"Hey, let go of me! How dare you lay a hand on a human! You can't just throw me out! Ouch!"
CRASH.
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What ive read so far i really like and im sure Its gonna vet even better and I should know that cuz im the beta for the story and already have read more chapters And its very good imo [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
when it got to THAT scene between Vivian and her half brother, I felt so sick that I ended up briefly skimming the first volume. Objectively I think what you wrote was great for the story, but I couldn't read it. Sorry about that. I know you put a lot of effort into the first volume, and I didn't read it. after volume 2 started, I finally slowed down, and I'm really enjoying it.
From what I've read, the world building is pretty consistent. The detailed description of the characters makes it pretty easy to visualise what's going on in that fictional world. In some sense, it feels like this is more of a journal at times, which is not bad by any means, and only adds more to look forward to the different styles one can view this as. Can't wait to read more of it.
Oh my... This was purely amazing. I was usually a fast reader, but by reading this piece of work, I couldn't help but tried to read it slowly and savor the contents. Do you like how things were described in detail, touching every part of your personal thought? If you do, then this is going to be one of the few best first-person view stories you'll ever read. Even I, as a writer, would say I am lacking in many parts, especially in the detail. My favorite part is around chapters 30 to 40s, where MC is taking time hunting, selling them, and coming through the life of reality. It was harsh, yet enjoyable, mean, but logical, and not to forget a detail, but not overly explained. My praise is unworthy, but yours would do if you just went through the story and get immersed into what the world the author brought to us. Go ahead and try. I don't regret reading it, and you too.
First of all the story is good, quite interesting, the writing quality needs to be worked on I would give it a 4/5 but with a little tweaking it will be even better, I like the way the author described the characters, pretty easy for any reader to understand or even visualize, overall good job.
Throw the first chapter the story gets better and better. It haves slow chapters and chapters you don't want to end too.
A story that touches the heart. Although the introduction starts a bit sad, it becomes motivating in the following chapters. I really enjoyed reading it. Imma look forward to the continuation.