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The burning rose
Penulis: Sebastian0narvaez
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In an alternate universe, Summer lives and finds Cinder in Atlas. She decided to bring her back to Patch. Due to her traumatic past, Cinder is hesitant to trust the family, but after a close brush with death, she opens up to them and is eventually adopted by the loving family. After a few years of training, she heads off to Beacon to train to become a huntress!
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this is a pretty nice story so far. i like the Background and worldbuilding you did so far with Cinder and all the characters feel pretty good. Cinder portrayal matches up with the canon character really well, how she wants to hurt Yang in arguments etc and her general demeanor. that part fits well with an immature Cinder that didnt fully convert to the dark side yet. Now we need the healing part where the rough edges of her darker parts get sanded down, but we get to that :D there is enough room for potential character development that makes it fun to read this story.