4.12 (24 peringkat)
Ringkasan
what will you do if you have;
infinite skill point
infinite system point
infinite energy
omni-system shop
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let's follow our protagonist as he got transmigrated to one of his favourite novel and becomes an existence that rules the omniverse with his overpowered and Omnipotent system.
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This is a recreation of my previous Novel the Omnipotent system
Extra Chapters
200 Power Stones - 1 Extra Chapter
500 Power Stones - 2 Extra Chapters
1200 Power Stones - 3 Extra Chapters
20 Golden Tickets - 1 Extra Chapter
100 Golden Tickets - 2 Extra Chapters
500 Golden Tickets - 3 Extra Chapters
Gifts
Cola, Pizza and capsule -- Have a character with the gifter's name.
Massage Chair, Luxury Car and Dragon -- can create a character
Magic Castle, Spacecraft and Golden Gachapon -- all of the above and have their characters revolve around the Mc, can also create a storyline or plot.
This is my discord link, still working on it though
https://discord.com/invite/RyuzMVHR
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Tulis ulasanIt was all good for the op mc part but as i read on it started to get boring. There is nothing unique about it and i would say the story development could be better. The fight scenes needs improvement. The description of power, skills, realms etc sounds awesome but the utilisation needs work. Well you could give it a try if you want but keep your expectations in check ๐........
Mc is the peak of existence right from the start. Love the fact that heโs originally from Nigeria.
This is a good book only if you like really and I say REALLY OP mc from the start, Adam is already broken in the second chapter so if you don't like this kind of stories this isn't for you. There are only 8 chapters so i can't say much about the plot or in wich way it will progres but i'm looking forward to more chpter, good eork author. (ps. sorry for the bad english, not my main leanguage)
Sangat Membosankan untuk membaca ini novel, saya merasa hambar. Mc tidak keren dan setiap tindakannya membuat saya bingung baca ini novel. Bahkan tujuannya/ motivasinya pun saya tidak tahu atau saya yang lupa. Novel ini tidak sedikit pun memberi kesan di benak saya Satu kata bosan
Mc is very op which is good and the story is fast which I like too, but there are some chapters that are just full of information and nothing else which I dislike bit, but overall very good and chill to read!
Author, you should write conversation between every character with a more flexible touch. Specially, the conversation between Adams and Anderson. You are not showing their natural human behaviour. Also in some chapter you didnโt explain how Anderson felt after seeing Adams newborn power against Vitto. I hope you will work MORE on subtle common sense explanation in various conversation also with more flexible touch. Not like first 10 chapters where those conversation felt like some robots are talking. This book has the potential. Specially I am liking this very much. But due to robotic conversation I am very much frustrated.. I hope you will focus in this sector so that reader like us can appreciate your efforts.[img=recommend]
I don't no what to say I read up to 29 ch and it's good not very good and there is no driving factor that hook up to the chapter to continue reading is average up to 29 cb in my view and I have I complain to a mc he distribute primordial body like free to the character do not understand their value like jack and etc. I give you that author to give him Omnipotent System but it's a waste to this type of mc and why don't he bring back his parents back to like he can do that but no he went to revenge that all.
Author's review, you can ask your questions here and I will answer them to the best of abilities. thank you for reading and remember drop gifts, they are my motivation.
Author, could you please speed up the process? I dont like reading the Remembering The Past Chapters. It felt sad for me. Could you please tell me the synopsis of that chapter ?
Honest Review. I think the author was dripping when he wrote this novel. And most likely he forgot about Mc's powers.
Membuka SPOILERI personally enjoyed it. I love OP characters so this is right up my alley. Even though its a little evident that AI was used. So what? The story is a little good so enjoy it. The only thing I dont like a bit is harem thing but since the story doesnt resolve around the harem its a good read. I stopped purchasing coins a while ago since the stories nowadays are utter trash. But this was worth purchasing coins for.
๐๐ข, ๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ซ๐๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ฌ ๐๐๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ ๐๐๐. ๐ ๐ซ ๐ญ๐ก๐จ, ๐ฐ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐๐ซ๐๐ข๐ง ๐ฐ๐๐ฌ ๐ข๐ง ๐๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ฅ-๐จ๐ง ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐'๐ฆ ๐๐ง ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐ญ๐๐ค๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ฌ ๐๐จ๐ซ ๐๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง๐ฌ, ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐๐ฌ, ๐๐๐ง๐ ๐ & ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ/๐๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐ญ. ๐๐จ๐ญ ๐ ๐จ๐ง๐ง๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ ๐๐ฎ๐๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐จ๐ค ๐ข๐ง๐ฌ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ฌ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐ ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐ฐ๐๐ง๐ง๐ ๐๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐จ๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐จ ๐ข๐ญ. ๐๐จ ๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ ๐๐ญ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ, ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ ๐ก๐ญ ๐ข๐ญ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐๐ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ฉ๐๐ซ ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ. ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ'๐ซ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฐ๐ง ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐๐ง๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐ ๐จ๐ ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ซ๐ค, ๐ก๐ข๐ญ ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฉ ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ (๐๐๐ง๐ง๐๐ญ๐ญ_๐ฅ๐จ๐ฅ) ๐จ๐ซ ๐๐ง๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ ๐ซ๐๐ฆ (๐๐ฏ๐_๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฌ๐_). ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ก๐๐๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ฎ ๐ฌ๐จ๐จ๐ง!
I like everything about it other than the fact it doesnโt seem to be updating as much and that he spends way more time bullying randoms than needed. He takes like 4-5 chapters to get his revenge for his father and himself as he is dead at the beginning and then 12+ chapters (thatโs all I had the chance to read before it got too boring and caused me to drop it) toying with randoms as a form of revenge for getting looked down upon. Like here is your fathers killer on one side, now make these people who literally only looked down on you and didnโt believe your strength, letโs make their punishment like 10 times worse for no other reason than fun. Make it make sense man. Plus it just got boring after 12+ chapters of repeating things and getting nowhere.
Penulis Adams2004
this story is good ๐๐. would have loved if you hadn't dropped your infinite system novel