The Take Over Of Damachi

In a world where monsters and adventures already roam, there will be some newcomers that shake the very foundation of civilization, but the question is are they adventurers, monsters, or both?
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Hey guys first time writer here, as you can see this first chapter is not done yet, I’m still working on it, there are still a few things I need to work on before continuing.
But a quick question before continuing, do you guys like the way it is written the wording, sentence structure etc.?