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Umino Iruka and the Will of Fire HP/Naruto
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Umino Iruka and the Will of Fire by Leicontis
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Amazing in both world and character development. The design of the system is also amazing just trying to think how higher stats affects things. Overall itโs a 15 out of 10
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Honestly the story is great, but the problem is you copy and paste the status in every chapter. It gets so long by chapter ten itโs pretty much 75% of the chapter. Seriously just remove it and only keep skills that were updated or stats that were updated during the chapter.
This is just cause I like the name of this novel๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค
its a good story so far only downside i see is the info dump at the end of every chapter i get this story was taken from somebody else but that guy havent posted a new chapter since the 36th one and that was back in 2016 so im sure he gave up on this story im gonna wait and see if you will be picking it up again from where he left off if not i guess ill have to go find something else to read
Very nice to read.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Very good ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โบ๏ธโบ๏ธโบ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
This is really a great story but it's dead. The author never continued it as most of the sw gamer stories....................................
The story is not moving at all. With all the technical jargon used in the oh so small chapters this is boring. Author find a way to stop using the MC's status page to make up the word count.
You've admitted that this isn't your story which is decent of you, but that doens't change the fact that you just copied the story from somewhere else.