/ / We died, I was reincarnated as a Hero,I was shocked that my friend is the Demon King,the one that suprise me the most is the other one is a slave...
We died, I was reincarnated as a Hero,I was shocked that my friend is the Demon King,the one that suprise me the most is the other one is a slave...
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The three of us are schoolmates,we consider ourselves as neets we always play together read together have fun together. After school something bad happened...but this is where the fun begins...
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I suggest to improve your descriptive writing and make a add more for in-depth to describe the character, the surrounding, the environment. Also try to match the box to prevent it looks awkward since it took 2 bubbles to finish a sentence.