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Thanks for the Chapter! That came out of left field. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! All of the character interactions in this have to be some of the best I've read so far. The side characters feel so alive and different with just a little bit of screen time. You're doing great Author-san! See you in the next one.

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Thanks for the Chapter! Desolus is really working for his name huh? See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! I'm almost certain that Tatsumaki is going to have a variant ability for her breakthrough to Aurora now and I'm super excited to see it. Having Hoopa come over and check out the gang would be super cool too! Tatsumaki being the second pokemon to catch the attention of a legendary would be a cool thing to have in Mikail's back pocket. It could also be a bait and switch though... See you in the next one.

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Thanks for the Chapter!

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Thanks for the Chapter! I don't know if I said this before, but I love the way you've decided to make the Force have the utility of a GPS. I've never connected it to that in my mind and it seems like such an obvious utilization in hindsight. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! I love how you've worked in a way to make Voldemort, or a version of him at least, a legitimate threat. That's usually the biggest weakness of Harry Potter fanfics. I'm also interested in all the world-building you've been doing lately. The insight into the more Eastern Traditions of the world is good to see. I do wonder at how all of the plot hooks you've set up are going to be navigated though. The Sect Leader seemed pretty important and if that sect in particular was the chinese equivalent of Hogwarts then the politics of this could get tense. Regardless, I'm looking forward to more. See you in the next one.

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Thanks for the Chapter!

Thanks for the Chapter!

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Thanks for the Chapter! I actually like this latest element you’ve introduced. Expanding the world like this is better than introducing an ancient civilization with magic way more powerful than ‘modern’ magic. I’m also kind of hoping that this guy will end up teaming up with Lucas. Alt!Universe Voldemort seems like a big enough deal that some teamwork might be the way to go. Whatever the case, I’m excitedly looking forward to more. See you in the next one.

*Nagini *Voldy Mahonia and Boldly, really Google?

Thanks for the Chapter! I see that Lucius is getting a little impatient. Our MC has Voldemort basically in the bag though. Sirius is out and that means he has access to the locket, the ring, the diadem and original voldy; he just needs the diary and the cup at this point. Mahonia isn’t a problem yet right? Boldly made her between books 1 and 4 while he was wandering around, or is that my fanon knowledge lying to me. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! I keep imagining Subnautica style leviathans creeping up on the MC and I’m just thankful it’s not some Cthulhu type stuff he found. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! I think the chat group can have whatever gender ratio. The more important part is who you want the members to be. It’d be cool to have some characters from other Chinese novels mixed in with more classic group chat members. See you in the next one.