Story telling is an art. Where imagination reign supreme....
2017-11-17 Bergabung Philippines
Just finish reading the current chapter and this makes me think. This fanfiction sure is very great. This is what you long for when you read things out. You can place your shoe in his and let you think. This cliff-hanger is so great that it gives more impact due to the foreshadowing you pulled earlier. Will the MC kill her? or Will he not? There will be a massive butterfly effect if he did so. Just think about a bunch of mutant kids becoming some lab rat that will also breed another lines of hatred aimed at his loved nation and his circle. Or rather another group emerging with more grande ideals than Magneto from her circle of kids. 👌👌
ch 10 [58]
Anime & Comics · Anas_Nazim
Author, you're making me and other reading seems to be stupid right? Can you atleast make your story straight. things are very confusing and the way you execute things seems like a child tantrum. Jason died without much explanation after a scream with MC still outside. Let it slide but killed an OC you inserted and didn't even make it worth. You're playing with us and it looks hateful. Thanks for the Chapter.
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Others · TheGodSage
Author, you're making me and other reading seems to be stupid right? Can you atleast make your story straight. things are very confusing and the way you execute things seems like a child tantrum. Jason died without much explanation after a scream with MC still outside. Let it slide but killed an OC you inserted and didn't even make it worth. You're playing with us and it looks hateful. Thanks for the Chapter.
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Others · TheGodSage
It seems the character become more lifeless.
ch 61 Manipulating Odin
Realistic · wheretonow
It's Great! It's already great for me. You're making this vomit inducing world that only exist to satisfy ego and wishes to a vivid world that every character that only revolves for being beautiful and powerful to a 3D one. It feels more alive that every chapter you upload is like a new arrangement of a song. Just Continue Adding new artistic color to those bland one and keep making to story alive. To much fanservice ruin the novel but your story within the novel is melding it back for me. Thank You! Good Job!
ch 55 Not A Chapter
Anime & Comics · darvom
Forced.... way too forced bro. Killing mercilessly like some xianxia protagonists when Kurama can sense emotion from others knowing no harm will be brought to him. It breaks the current status of his mentally. I love how you the story is going on it's just this chapter seems planned but not very well executed. Foreshadowing shows the tension of searching but it burst like some bubble so quick so much disappointing but it's a fanfic so pretty much okay. Thanks for the Chapter.
ch 44 Almost a Fight
Movies · Daemon_Angelo17
Love those descriptive words. Filling up the cup of coffee.
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Fantasy · Littlepunnie
Nice play!! GG! We have our winner!
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Fantasy · Littlepunnie
Nice! I just want to point out some correction. Witch is a female version of Wizard (male). It's better if you call male witch as Warlock than wizard. Thank you for the chapter!
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Fantasy · Littlepunnie
thank you 🤗🤗😀
hahahha
ch 88 Chapter 86. Moving in the right direction (1)
Realistic · Killerbee
Good one, It break from the monotonous character troupe. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Games · BlueToxicc
Nice!! Now, I want to see how will the consequences play out.
ch 51 Volume 2 Chapter 7: Dragon Breath
Let's play Minecraft in a world of Swords and Spells (Rewritten)
Video Games · Zaztra_Vandesh