ledski

male LV 13
2018-02-13 Bergabung Brazil
Lencana 18

Moments 65
ledski
ledski
2 years ago
Commented

I am pushing through since i enjoy the story, but the shift in present and past tense every now and then really breaks the immersion. Author should probably edit those chapters so that he only uses one of them.

ledski
ledski
3 years ago
Commented

Dude, he didn't reflect over his poor choice whatsoever. He only thought about mechs mechs mechs without even taking in the fact he almost lost Lucky. What a deuchebag.

ledski
ledski
3 years ago
Commented

How can he give 25% of his company for peanuts because "he values family and does not want to be greedy" and then bet lucky for a license. This is not just stupid, this is contradictory.

ledski
ledski
3 years ago
Commented

While I do enjoy the novel, I have to say that this getting in Ves work's way is getting old fast and it is borderline idiotic. The captain's grandfather is spending a fortune to hire him as a Mech designer only for his spoiled granddaughter get in the way? It makes no sense. Even if she does not like him, the leader of the expedition should still hold all the say in what is done to the mechs. The fact that she can get in his way alltogether reeks of unnecessary drama and unrealistic plot. That said, I thank you author for the chapter! I am enjoying the read immensely.

ledski
ledski
3 years ago
Commented

I’m out.

ledski
ledski
3 years ago
Commented

I see. He decided to mount Zayn in the end. Does that make him a furry?

ledski
ledski
3 years ago
Commented

That's really all uncharacteristic of the MC how we saw him so far. Giving his enemy a chance? Why? Hopefully he will have a more consistent personality after getting rid of Seth.

ledski
ledski
3 years ago
Commented

I am confused. If he can raise any undead without their heads, doesn't it make them virtually unkillable? You would have to desintegrate them then. Isn't this too op?

ledski
ledski
3 years ago
Commented

To be honest, I am not too fond of this whole zombie individuality business. I know they have been rebranded as 'undead' by the author, but that is basically just a change in name. Their many advantages are supposed to be balanced by a permanent mindless status. I just hope that this revenge story does not become a romcom.

ledski
ledski
3 years ago
Commented

It was never mentioned when the MC had upgrade his rogue. I am assuming here that he had to enter and leave the Nexus once to unsummon the old one and create a new one, since he didn't have the necessary amount of HP and MP at the time, and that was omitted to spare us the details. In any case, thanks for the chapter.