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Ah okay. Thanks. That makes more sense when you explain it that way.
ch 2007 Ascension
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak
A what?
"You…" He whispered. "You have undergone the soul transference ritual."
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak
How about a Mass release? Please! 🤣
ch 954 954 Field Trip
Inheritor Of Magic: The Magi King
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
Yeah probably at the higher realms I’m sure. Definitely not now, but I can picture it happening.
However, it showed him the most antithetical domains for each of the three individual species integrated into the chimera. Two of them had evolved for hot environments, and only one of them had evolved for cold environments. It was a shame that there was no one temperature antithetical to all of its being, but alas, he could only choose the lesser of two evils.
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak
He’ll be godly if he can summon the void of space, the actual antitheses to life itself.
However, it showed him the most antithetical domains for each of the three individual species integrated into the chimera. Two of them had evolved for hot environments, and only one of them had evolved for cold environments. It was a shame that there was no one temperature antithetical to all of its being, but alas, he could only choose the lesser of two evils.
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak
I think seeing the Author’s vision helps inform my own visualization if that makes sense? Like my image of Khan is different than the one you have on the cover art, but things like skin color and exact hair color transfer over. It’s like a nice reference for me to look at to make sure certain features carry over properly. Like an informed imagination, I guess? Haha. Yah, please do at some point. I’d want to see what she looks like in your mind.
No one could hear the conversation, and Khan's face was as impenetrable as always. Monica also retained her elegant façade, but her mind thanked her dark skin for hiding the slight blush rising to her cheeks.
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
Any chance you got a picture of what Monica looks like anywhere Eve? Actually curious how you envision her. Tbh, I forgot the detail that her skin is darker? You should add an image to the characters option or something for the book. It’d be nice.
No one could hear the conversation, and Khan's face was as impenetrable as always. Monica also retained her elegant façade, but her mind thanked her dark skin for hiding the slight blush rising to her cheeks.
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
Extremely satisfying and I can’t wait for more chapters honestly!
ch 950 950 Rank Eight
Inheritor Of Magic: The Magi King
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
Yooooooo
"Spare my brother," Rebecca announced, "And I'll give you the Nak."
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
So satisfying! Love this dwarf dude. Bring him home to the forest haha.
ch 942 942 Thorin's Forge
Inheritor Of Magic: The Magi King
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
It’s a fantasy world and everyone receives cultivation opportunity at 8 years old. Please keep reading or drop it if you can’t suspend your disbelief that this is a fantasy novel.
With a flourish of the door's opening, in walked a scholarly gentleman, Sir Ian. He was a man that looked to be about 60 years old. In reality, he was already 8,000 years old as the average life expectancy in the world of Nexaria is 10,000 years.
Spirit’s Awakening: The Path of Lightning and Water
Fantasy · JPNovelFan
I apologize for my initial rude tone. It definitely was rude mate. I forget we’re not casual buddies, and I think there’s definitely some entitlement on my end there that feels like I should get angry over feeling like I’m being insulted while reading a story that normally is ridiculously entertaining. I was a d!ck, that’s for sure. Sorry about that.
ch 1983 Incomprehensible
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak
There’s one more non-privilege chapter haha! Keep reading! ☺️
ch 125 Progenitor
Spirit’s Awakening: The Path of Lightning and Water
Fantasy · JPNovelFan
Understandable. I could word myself more like a professional email if you’d prefer in future comments. And I referenced since the beast arc started he’s been belittling Kane the entire time (second paragraph first sentence). It’s just gotten worse in these last few Mellow Arc Chapters, (my first paragraph comment). If you want constructive criticism that’s less aggressive, I’ll give it to you. I think you’re doing a disservice to the character rid Kane and treating him like a simpleton, but at the same time, your audience, who is being told the story with Rui as the narrator. See, you use Rui as the narrator 90% of the time with no actual narrator most of the time. He is explaining everything to Kane, but at the same time us as the audience. When you belittle Kane, it’s as if you’re belittling the reader. It’s an unintended consequence, I’m sure, but one I don’t think you’ve realized is happening as the author. With my warmest regards,
ch 1983 Incomprehensible
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak
You’re right. Maybe I have too much of a religious upbringing and seeing Angels being referenced, I feel like Rui should have a way bigger reaction. I wouldn’t say Transcendants are gods though? At least nothing we’ve been shown so far states that martial artists become gods and can create worlds in the future. Sure we might reach there, since I guess reversing death being done by sages is kind of up there in the realm of gods anyways. I just feel like Angels should have a bigger impact on someone from Earth where Angels don’t exist as a “maybe they once roamed the lands” like dragons. Sure dragons are maybe they existed but Angels are more religious and heavenly kind of. Seeing them reduced to some Darwin experiment feels odd with zero comment about them from Rui. That’s all I’m getting at. I recognize my bias though.
"There's not a single known nest of angels in the Human Domain, at least," Rui informed him. "I didn't think we would run into one here. More importantly, I've learned more about how the dungeon functions. Its shortcomings and limitations. I think I have an idea of how we're going to break out of this place."
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak
I think me sticking around for nearly 2k chapters means I certainly enjoy the additional thought and depth to it that you imbue into the story. However, if that’s all you got from my comment, I highly suggest you reread what I wrote. The way your storytelling these beast arc chapters has developed FEELS as the READER to ME, like you’re just consistently treating Kane like an idiot and over elaborating endlessly with zero action and telling Kane that we can’t do anything until Rui finishes explaining things endlessly. The whole bit with Kane suggesting to tell The Doctor about their plans or involve him was now the second time he’s suggested speaking with the doctor, only to be shut down by Rui and treated like a simpleton for even suggesting the idea. Once again, that’s how it comes across to ME as the READER. A different perspective than yours. I would think this alternate perspective could help you in crafting future chapters so you can see how it comes across rather than just insulting me for thinking I don’t enjoy the complex and depth you add to the story by having Rui be so thoughtful. He can absolutely explain things and be thoughtful without belittling Kane constantly. THAT’S my point.
ch 1983 Incomprehensible
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak
Konrad’s explanation helped explain it better. Thanks!
ch 2007 Ascension
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak