Webnovel Author: CouchPotatoDandy - Fanfic Collection

This is another one of those fanfics where the author tries to be mysterious on the first few chapters, unfortunately all this does is giving me an headache and make me drop this fanfic when I couldn't take it anymore.. So I dropped this at chapter 6

I got to chapter 10 before I dropped this fanfic. The grammar was good, the problem was with the flow of the story. The author changed the MC name midway for some reason, the cultivation levels were all over the place with no explanation, saying the MC doesn't care about people who are not related to him and yet in his previous life he died trying to say innocent people who had no relation to him etc

I only managed to read up to chapter 5 before my brain burned itself out... The grammar is so bad it's amazing. I know the author said that English is his second language, so don't expect much, but even when readers give him comments to fix, he doesn't correct the writing... In any case, the concept of the story looks nice and I would love to read it in the future when it undergoes editing.

I've reached chapter 26 before I dropped this fanfic. It's mainly focused on Kingdom Building while also the MC is training to become more powerful. The grammar is excellent without mistakes and the flow of the story is also good. The reason for me to drop it is because it just wasn't my cup of tea and I didn't like how there were too many Pantheon of many gods all over the place.

The grammar is very bad and I honestly had an headache trying to decipher what the author meant to write. That resulted in me not managing to understand many abilities of the MC and his cultivation technique. And that resulted in me giving up and dropping this fanfic a chapter 25...

In fact if the author would agree I don't mind being the editor.

Definitely! I kind of loved your previous fanfics, so I would definitely give this fanfic a second chance after your editing. Thanks for your hard work!

This is definitely a better translation then the previous one, but it still has room for improvement. I have read it from start to finish and I can honestly say that even though sometimes I had thoughts of dropping this fanfic because of the many grammar mistakes, I couldn't drop it cuz it was too good. I really hope the author could find someone to review and edit his chapters, that will definitely make this Naruto fanfic one of the best in this site!

I have read some of the fanfic Every Hole is a Goal, but even so I still found myself with a headache while reading the first five chapters. I hate it when a story begin mysteriously with no explanation about things, I tried to understand and even gave this story a chance and read to chapter 5 try and understand what's going on and still failed. That's when I knew I need to drop this and give this fanfic a 1 star review.

I guess the first and second chapter were to build the suspense, unfortunately for me it only gave me an headache and I dropped this fanfic. I hate it when authors don't understand that suspense needs to be built throughout the story and not just drop it on the first chapter and act all mysterious.

This fanfics started nice, although from the very first chapter I could already spot some plot holes. For example, the MC was born to human parents but he has the Saiyan bloodline with a tail, but for some reason not he's Burns nor the women he slept with asks what the f*ck is going on... This fanfic is in the air for 5 years already, and apparently the author made some adjustments to the earlier chapters and while reading I honestly can't understand some things. He deleted half of the 2nd chapter and in the 9th chapter there was some inside joke that I didn't get since parts of the earlier chapters were deleted.. so take that into account if you are a new reader. Another thing that bothered me is the fact that the MC choose to be a devil in addition to all of his existing powers. For me it's a very illogical decision since even though he will receive magic he would also receive the vulnerability to holy lights magic and holy artifacts. And it's not like he was weak that he needed to be a devil, he was plenty strong without it... After I said all of this, I have only reached chapter 25 before I stopped reading, I hoped the fanfic will get better but the flow of writing felt more like reading a diary then a book so I lost interest and dropped it. So considering the number of chapters available in this fanfic it's possible the author improved greatly in the future, but I wouldn't know.