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Ah. Good chapter. Its a nice change to see Danzo have character development! Keep up the good work author-san!

I just hope this will deviate from the orignal and the MC would save Nawaki from Danzo. I often wonder what would happen if the the Senju clan remain unlike in the original.

Interesting. In my knowledge, in the original story Nawaki's death was the trigger to Orichimaru's change. Seeing how fragile life is and started his quest for immortality. Meaning, he cared about Nawaki as his sensei or at least cared about Tsunade seing her so broken about Nawaki and Dan's death.

Hmm. Okay author-san, I'll trust in your judgement. You've been great so far. Keep the chapters coming. Hehe

Good chapter. But a little bit too easy for the children. one or few children should have died or at least maimed. If only to curb their arrogance, especially the little princess. Now, how arrogant will they be that they killed a famed jonin with practically little sweat.

Oh God, a simp. This is heartbreaking.

Great story so far but author-san the pace is unbelievably slow. Its over a hundred chapters now and the MC is still a child. This is the problem of many fanfic authors. Having so much focus on the childhood years then suddenly having a time skip and then rushing the story towards the end because they got bored already or just doesn't have the time or interest anymore. I don't mind the release dates, but I hope the pace of the story gets a little bit faster.

Thank you for the response my guy. More power to you. Great story. Maybe just a little improvement on your grammar and it will be a much better story. Maybe use grammarly app? or seek help from others as your editor? I don't know, but great story nonetheless. Keep up the good work.

That's great then! That will solve my dilemma. Having puppet government in Essos through Lothar that will secretly help the Prussians is a great plan. Though another problem will arise. Will his men know that they are not really exiled? Because the soldiers under Lothar may grow to hate and resent Friedrich and the Prussians by thinking that they were exiled after accomplishing the mission. Or will they be allowed to go home unlike Lothar?

Okay, I can see that as a possibility though very unlikely since he is dealing with fanatical people. His men, specially Lothar will very likely will want to go home after the mission since that was what he promise to them. Glory, honor and riches. Would fanatical people want to stablish a vassal state continent away from home, away from family and friends surrounded by heathens with no possibility to return home? I find that very hard to believe. Not to mention stablishing a vassal state will mean invasion and declaring war on the powers of Essos. He is not king of Westeros to stablish a vassal state. He is Lord paramount of Reach yes, but still under King Robert and will need royal approval to do so which I don't think he will get since as I've said that will mean Westeros invading and declaring war on Essos.

But why prevent them from returning though? Not only will it set a bad impression that Friedrich abandons his people after using them but will also result in him having powerful and fanatical enemies that can plot revenge down the line. In every society, specially in medieval times, there are always gonna be radicals and fanatics. Even in todays time, people like those exist. A good leader just knows how to utilize, discipline and reward them properly. Just like a guard dog. Yes, they are dangerous, but discipline them properly by reward and punishment and they will have their use. Specially in the coming war in Westeros. Fanatical people are the best soldiers if properly utilize.

Moat Cailin having quick access to other regions of Westeros? What are you talking about my good man? Are you high? As you said it's beyond the neck. It's so far from Stormlands, Reach, Crownlands and especially Dorne. Where is the authors logic here? The only region its close to is the Riverlands and maybe The Vale. My goodness.