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StormEliteVII
male LV 5A Brazilian who likes to read and play games.
2018-06-02 Bergabung BrazilLencana 6
Moments 6
It's Brazilian Portuguese. Already fixed.
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The Deity Index System
Urban · StormEliteVII
No problem and thanks for the feedback. I initially started studying english in mid 2017, stopped for a few months then returned so I'm not that much proficient yet since I'm still learning. As for the proofreader, it's a little hard at the moment but I agree with you.
ch 14 Nine Suns Demonic Body
The Deity Index System
Urban · StormEliteVII
Thank you for your thoughts. The reason I put a little more action into this section of the story is because the next arc will be more about the deities' past and will have more dialogue and world building than action.
ch 14 Nine Suns Demonic Body
The Deity Index System
Urban · StormEliteVII
it is explained later on, but soon as the last chapetrs are released in the next few days, I wll be correcting all mistakes and adding things I may have forgotten.
Elijah was dining alone in the inn, thinking deeply about everything he had seen in that dream. Though the dream had ended the moment he saw Chloe, everything was so real as if all this had actually happened.
Supreme Origin: Time King
Fantasy · StormEliteVII
Thanks for pointing it out, I forgot to edit this part
The Deity Index System
Urban · StormEliteVII