Webnovel Author: Lord_Hallow - Fanfic Collection

I genuinely like this story but the issue is that it doesn’t seem to be your work. This book was written by psychopath556 on FanFiction dot net. It is called Harry Potter: Lost Son. I don’t know if this is you using a different username or if you have permission to rewrite, but please give credit to the original author of you are posting it here.

Well written for sure. Unfortunately from what I’ve read so far it does not take place in the pokemon world. Just leaving this in case someone is wondering about that.

Well I really liked it and how gritty it was, especially the part about him being the first human to get where he got. Then you go and make him a non human. I get why you did it, but because of that I now find it uninteresting to read. The premise was great up until the dan machi part. I really wish you just had him strengthen his body without all the animal feature stuff. It would have been cool to see him still as a human survivor.

If I could give less stars I would. This shouldn’t even be on this site. Don’t throw exclusive paid content on here. I car barely tolerate all of those XsomethingX accounts that spam us with their pat reon stuff but at least they offer 10 chapters or so before they start with thier BS. If you want to promote a paid novel do it somewhere else unless you are also dropping it here for free. Haven’t you notice how everyone else does the pat reon stuff?