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ok. so starting with the plot: it is good. It's not smt exceptionally new, but it's interesting. Character development is also ok, as the number of chapters is too small yet. What i didn't like are the grammar mistakes, though they are not that serious, there's a lot of small "typo"s and mistakes. hmmm, that's pretty much it. oh, the world is also ok, basic fantasy setting u could say. nicely done, author, but I'd recommend either an editor, or just a person with good grammar tp check and instruct u on what ur mistakes are. 🖤🤍🖤🤍🖤🤍🖤🤍🖤🤍

Very goodu plot, very goodu writing style. Author is also very goodu. Need more chaps, and the rest is goodu. Author, gib more chaps!!! 🙂🙃🙂🙃🙂🙃

I planned on starting rewriting all chaps from september :3 U'll have to wait until I manage to finish em, then some more time until I make a small reserve of chaps (5-10) Just leave the novel in the collections, and u'll get a notification :3 Really happy ppl are still interested in what i wrote. Thank you all, it is really heartwarming!!!