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What a great prolouge!
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy · Elyon
I like the story so far, it has a decent beginning. The wordage and tense use could be improved. Overall, it has the potential to grow. [img=recommend]
LGBT+ · minniepens
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Webnovel 
What a great prolouge!
ch 0 1 Prologue
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Fantasy · Elyon