LegendaryKin

2yr

Posted

10/10 in my opinion. This novel is a masterpiece for what it is as who ever reads it become addicted; same for me. The author uses great grammar, which is displayed in each chapter and doesn’t make the MC actions repetitive. Give it a try.

GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS

Urban · Lordflash

LegendaryKin

2yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

ch 99 Immortal Realm!

GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS

Urban · Lordflash

LegendaryKin

2yr

Replied to isotobe

Raw?

Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start

Fantasy · Strange Human

LegendaryKin

2yr

Posted

1 star Although I liked this novel in the beginning, as I progressed upto chapter 81 I’ve decided that reading this was a waste of time and that the so called “MC” is just a simp. His so called revenge against Hailey is garbage and the amount of times he let her off because of his so called feelings for her is outrageously stupid.

The Abandoned Husband Dominates

Urban · I Have Something To Say

LegendaryKin

2yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

ch 97 Your time is up!

GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS

Urban · Lordflash

LegendaryKin

2yr

Commented

You taking a break levelgap07?

ch 41 The Ultimate Mobile System

Upgrading in Apocalypse

Urban · Yeye0900

LegendaryKin

2yr

Commented

Things are getting pretty exciting now that the mc can do cultivation and great job levelgap07 on the improvements. Thanks for the chapter.

ch 41 The Ultimate Mobile System

Upgrading in Apocalypse

Urban · Yeye0900

LegendaryKin

2yr

Posted

So I just started reading this novel and wow, it went from “yeah this is gold.” to “wait don’t I know these events from somewhere?”. Such a disappointment. Half way through the novel you will start to notice that it is becoming more like the ultimate scheming system and although some bits are changed, they didn’t even before to put it much effort.

Immortal Hero: I Can See the Success Rate

Eastern · Langya Shu

LegendaryKin

2yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

ch 40 Upgrading Money, Mines, and Woods

Upgrading in Apocalypse

Urban · Yeye0900

LegendaryKin

2yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter.

ch 39 They won't let this go

Upgrading in Apocalypse

Urban · Yeye0900

LegendaryKin

2yr

Posted

It’s a very interesting novel and it’s not that bad. Although, it may be lacking in writing quality, the rest is perfect and it’s something you should have in your list to read.

Upgrading in Apocalypse

Urban · Yeye0900

LegendaryKin

2yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

ch 38 Overwhelming Gesture of Friendship

Upgrading in Apocalypse

Urban · Yeye0900

LegendaryKin

2yr

Commented

Try using ‘has’ instead of ‘have’, like For example, instead of ‘he have a lot of points on the system.’ It’s ‘he has a lot points on the system.’ Hope this helps out and thanks for the chapter

Also, it didn't cost him anything. He have a lot of points on his systems so he don't have to worry at all.

Upgrading in Apocalypse

Urban · Yeye0900

LegendaryKin

2yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

ch 37 Unseen Saviours

Upgrading in Apocalypse

Urban · Yeye0900

LegendaryKin

2yr

Commented

Although the quality has dropped a bit in terms of grammar and choice of words from chapter 35-36, they are still very good in terms of events that has lead it to be where we are now. I very much do enjoy this novel and I hope you improve as the chapters go on. Thanks for the chapter.

ch 36 The Confused Brigg

Upgrading in Apocalypse

Urban · Yeye0900

LegendaryKin

2yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

ch 35 Investigating the Outpost

Upgrading in Apocalypse

Urban · Yeye0900

LegendaryKin

2yr

Commented

So Neil, oh boy where do I start… Even though he has upgraded every organ in his body, he is still dumb let’s be real. He also doesn’t know how valunable food is in the apocalypse and gives it away like candy in exchange for the local currency which isn’t worth it if he did research on their camp.

ch 34 The Expedition Party