Niche267

female LV 3

bored.

2019-02-06 Bergabung United States
Lencana 4

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Niche267
Niche267
1 years ago
Commented

Hello. I was originally reading this on scribblehub, and when going through my bookmarks, I noticed that it, and your account entirely, was deleted? What happened?

Niche267
Niche267
4 years ago
Commented

They're called suppressors.

This was a trick he learned in the army. If your gun wasn't equipped with a silencer, you can use the Silent Feet potion to temporarily muffle the sound. He headed directly toward the Goblin's Village.

My Faᵵe System

My Faᵵe System

· MellowGuy

Niche267
Niche267
4 years ago
Replied to Krisnan

Yeahhhh.

Niche267
Niche267
4 years ago
Posted

This is... Good? Like, actually? It's a supremely strange concept, but I've really enjoyed reading it. I honestly can't think of any flaws this has in particular. I hope for more.

Niche267
Niche267
4 years ago
Posted

The first sentence has a blatant error. Of the sort that's constantly repeated. The author doesn't bother to check what they wrote. If you're okay with that, then you can try it. Personally, I can't stand such a low standard of effort.

Niche267
Niche267
4 years ago
Commented

You're. You should at-least try with these things.

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· Masquerade1010

Niche267
Niche267
4 years ago
Commented

You have some serious problems with were's, we'res, and wheres.

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· Masquerade1010

Niche267
Niche267
4 years ago
Commented

Wow. An error on the literal first sentence. That's impressive.

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· Masquerade1010

Niche267
Niche267
4 years ago
Posted

Honestly. I really like this. It's written really well, all things considered. It's got many issues in it's writing, but it feels good, and in all ways that matter, that's the most important thing. However. The story. Honestly, it feels like random things just... Happen. There's absolutely no sense of causation. Things just... Happen as the Author wills it. The further into this you get, the worse it gets. Honestly, it's unbearable. Don't read this. The characters are great. The writing quality is a diamond in the rough. But the story is awful.

Niche267
Niche267
4 years ago
Commented

cheese. I like cheese pizza. And I don't hate pineapple on pizza, but it's not really pizza at that point.

(A/N: What's your favorite pizza toppings? Also, what's your view on pineapple on Pizza? I need to know.)

Time Stops When I'm with Her. (MHA)

Time Stops When I'm with Her. (MHA)

· Hyberions