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Your grammar is fine. Good chapter btw

Good chapter. also yes keep

I like this version of Cersei. Good job author.

once or twice, sure, but hes starting to sound like a nemesis pokemon hybrid

I am not certain why you have him keep saying stars

Thanks for the chapter. I look forward to how this will develop.

Now THIS is the attitude that Snape that should have had.

What a waste. Also, it is unlikely people will bother with other novels if you have a history of abandoning them.

This was a very good idea, and defo a first among hp ff's

Well I did not think I would ever be seeing an update to this novel. Pleasantly surprised.

Ergh, not ai's. Those are never done well.

Ah that is fair. It is well written enough I assumed you were well versed in writing. As a reader we always want more, that is the greed of the readers.

This is blasting through at a crazy speed. At this rate the content will run out before we hit tripple digets.

What world is this?

Have a nice holiday. Take it easy.

I like your take, especially on Dumbledore.

I think that sounds better. That said forgiveness is something that is earned and takes time. Creatively this is something that you do not need to rush as you can cookie crumb the steps and you have years in story to spread it out as an overarching storyline rather than a box to check.

Well this just took a creative nose dive. My guy spent 60 chapters setting up how bad they were to the kid, about how damaged he is inside and out and traumatized to oh we were tricked all is forgiven now.