DyMoonRvs - Profile

i-correct ko lang muntik lang tumigil ang puso niya. diko na ma edit kaya ilagay ko na dito

Ridiculous. kamamatay lang nanay niya tapos in a split second nakalimutan niya agad dahil sa isang lalaki?? 🤷.. lalaking niloko siya, ginago siya, pinagtawanan siya. Sa sobra niyang devastated sa pagkawala ng nanay niya timigil ng dalawang minuto ang puso niya tapos paggising niya parang nagkaroon siya amnesia at mas devastated pa siya sa paghihiwalay ng maloloko niyang asawa. 🤦

Emotional aspect or psychological aspect is extremely crucial when creating a story and that is what this story lacking. This is gonna be hard for the author to gather true readers.

It would have been perfect for me if the mc didn't have *** with his subordinate (Sofia) but to an outside instead like one night stand. It just gives very bad taste to me.😒 Specially Sofia is not an insignificant character she's one of the main characters that'll grow alongside the mc and not just side character who have only little part in the story. 😕😑