Webnovel Author: Ur_Mom_Gay - Fanfic Collection

Writing Quality 5/5 The writing quality is perfect there is nothing to complain about, It is also incredibly engaging, and the dialogue is top-notch Story Development 1/5 What is the story? there is no story, we don't know why he is there, we don't know what his goal is, and we don't know the fate of the DXD world as Issei is gone and the MC doesn't seem to care about him, but he should... I mean how many world-ending events happened in that godless anime? and the MC is probably the most passive MC I've ever read. why is he doing the thing that he's doing... we may never know, why is he letting girls get close to him? Does he wants to fucks, I doubt it as he has hundreds of chances for that already, so why? why there is so much character development between the MC and his girls yet we don't know why he is doing it Character Design 4/5 good ol-ecchi Characters, nothing to say about it Updating Stability 4/5 Update stability is great for fanfic of this quality World Background 3/5 IDK what to say about the setting, maybe messy is the right word, as I mentioned earlier DXD is here so it is problematic that we didn't see Issei and MC doesn't seem to care, those apocalyptic stuff seems to be forgotten

Konoha Village, I Defected From Hyuga Branch House

One more thing, Mc's doesn't know the existence of ROOT, which makes the hole hiding-your-strength thing more idiotic

Mc's decided not to show his strength because he sensed that some people are watching him, but how the fuck did he get so powerful after graduation? it felt as if he is been training since academy time. I felt that it made no sense when Mc decided to hide his strength without explanation at first, but after he mentioned that he was being watched it felt like another plot hole are being opened, as I mentioned, how did he get so powerful? in my opinion, The author's attempts at justifying Mc's behaviour during the academy arc just resulted in another plot hole