Atreyu_Parks - Profile

locked the first chapter no point in reading.

I liked this story but It has a lot of issues the translation or writing quality aren't great and there are a lot of story inconsistencies and just lack of explanation for most everything and you can't even infer most of the information because it seems to be following dnd races/abilities but completely butchered without explanation like how the mc is a red dragon that has its flavour replaced with a blue dragon at the same time it uses some sort of OP power that is barely explained and made useless unless the mc is about to die leaving absolutely no suspense. characters are 1 dimensional and flat with no real character development which can be fine but I have an issue with the fact that the author seems to introduce a new side character that we know is going to die in the next 10 chapters and wastes time fleshing them out as well as breaking the flow of the story. the other side characters seem like they will be important at some point but aren't fleshed out enough to make us care about them or understand why they will be important later other than they hold a position and dont like dragons. over all this story seems like an extremely rough draft and I would like to see it be refined.