Asc_EIf

Asc_EIf

LV 13

Discovering hidden treasures is my joy and happiness ☺️

2019-09-30 Bergabung Global
Lencana 5

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Asc_EIf
Asc_EIf
6 days ago
Posted

This novel has some mistakes but it is skippable, and the only thing I dislike is the cheat the MC has, apparently he needs to chop wood to accumulate points like that's a shit cheat lol. I'd rate this novel 6.5/10. its pretty slow and chill not exciting. good for wasting time.

Asc_EIf
Asc_EIf
6 days ago
Commented

did you mean to put saber instead of sword lol?

He had originally intended to find a Sword Skill book since sword-type Magic Treasures are cheaper.

After I Became a Divine Monarch, the Sect Wants Me to Marry In

After I Became a Divine Monarch, the Sect Wants Me to Marry In

· The rain is pouring down.

Asc_EIf
Asc_EIf
6 days ago
Replied to Lukname

Bro the first fight scene made me cringe so hard hahaha

Asc_EIf
Asc_EIf
6 days ago
Commented

dude I can't stop cringing reading this whole fight chapter 😅... if this is what I expect to see in all of the action scenes I'd probably skip it to avoid being cringed to death hahaha.

Asc_EIf
Asc_EIf
6 days ago
Commented

author letting his MC aura farm in front the male lead and his women, I'm not gonna lie i kind of find it cringey when she said he is so cool like she is in middle school 😭

Asc_EIf
Asc_EIf
6 days ago
Replied to FR3NCH_

It's fine, you only have 1-3 mistakes every chapter, although I think you should try to make sure any words aren't misspelled or missing. It seems you might be typing really fast that's why it's leading to a bit of mistakes. 1-3 mistakes is okay.

Asc_EIf
Asc_EIf
7 days ago
Replied to FR3NCH_

hmm I'm wondering why the MC isn't taking advantage of the fact that he is in a erotica world? surely erotic logic works? hmm?

Asc_EIf
Asc_EIf
7 days ago
Commented

" couldn't "

Asc_EIf
Asc_EIf
7 days ago
Commented

and "saw"

Asc_EIf
Asc_EIf
7 days ago
Commented

*someone*