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Writing Quality is pretty good and World building is very likeable but all characters have a IQ of 60 and the mc 70 and most have a young master complex. Was expecting a old wise ruthless lair mc like Fang Yuan out of R.I. not a 16 year old child with pride issues. why compete with everybody else when you already have the means to make it to the top in your other novels was the mc always on the younger side of things so most problems in character could eastly be talked away as he is still young but older mc are a completely different writing stile like making mistakes and growing becomes a good trait for young characters but awful for older ones like wear is your wisdom from all the mistakes of your past. young and fresh characters change overtime old and weathert ones have already finished their journey their trait to remain calm and navigate any situation is what truly show their age and wisdom why panic when you already know what to do. overall good story with bad characters

Original story and idee but most characters have weird/unrealistic personalities that don't follow any logic like how his sister keeps loving him without any reason for it or how even though he is this super strong and charismatic demon but can't even join a simple group to complete a maze and looking down on the people around you is not a reason to not adept to the situation that is not pride but ignorance. ps: typos in almost all chapters can easily be dealt with if you at least read what you are typing. ps ps : I am on chapter 42