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Hombre, falta la escena del sexo

Thanks for the chapter, I want more!!!!

Gracias por el capitulo, buena novela, sigue así.

Espero que en futuros capítulos la palabra "ok" no se use tanto o en absoluto, porque se siente raro.

Buen capitulo, pero espero que no vuelva a tomar alcohol, menos si después de un vaso quedó tan borracho

exactly

Thanks for the chapter, one thing that was uncomfortable to read and didn't add up was when he asked for the water and told her why he was asking for the water.

regulation I hope that PJ learns to fight, first the friend and now the new boy at any moment receives a beating, he seemed like a very good person and quite naive until now. The rest is pretty good, the fanfic is solid.

Thanks for the chapter, I'm watching this after letting the chapters accumulate, so I don't remember the personality of the protagonist, but I felt it was silly.

Emma x Bas, no felton

In the comments of the chapters where it is mentioned that she is pretty, you can find the image.

Another chapter that I don't like, I feel like lately they're screwing with the MC like it's nothing and he can't/do anything in response, example: when they injected him to put him to sleep and right now in the interview, the interviewer forced him to speak in Spanish (bothering him ) and he still took a photo with her at the end, I feel like he's being too passive.