Webnovel Author: LordofMountains - Fanfic Collection

I hate systems

Iam happy today i found 2 good novels that reminded me of the time i started reading webnovels for first time 6 years ago, nowadays all the novels are just trash cans filled with harem cliches or romance although it can appeal for new reader but old reader like me feel bored its good to find something good to read keep the good work up 👌👌

Badly written system i its making his past life experience completely meaninglessness and giving too much for no reason which make the story dull

Yes the novel is starting to get cringey

wow i read this before but the translation was very bad and ruined my day keep the good job dude i love the novels with teacher mc and old mc h was searching for one and thanks to god i found this

Don't mind him he is probably 40 years old lone dog that has never seen a girl in his life

Wasn't his falut???, the guy was expelled because his reckless training in the public if I was him I would killed him let alone try to attack him it's like going to prison because you was near someone who tried to abbduct a child

Why i feel that the girl is the Mc and the Mc is just supporting role to help her shine???

Oh he is dead so simple

Noice

This isn't what I expected

Why don't he use the 8 gates of pain

I think you should make the Mc focus on the moral side of his disciples too, because he may end up with a bunch of people with young master syndrome Also I feel that the interaction between Mc and disciples is devoid of emotions you can work on that too, I hope this review helps