JustAnApple

21d

Commented

Hmm, I think I've seen this somewhere before

ch 79 Chapter 79

One Piece: I'm Yamamoto Genryusai

Anime & Comics · FFAddict

JustAnApple

1mth

Commented

OP

ch 24 If it's him... maybe...

Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City

Anime & Comics · akikan40

JustAnApple

2yr

Commented

It is strange that he did not get the ability to absorb kinetic energy, this helps both energy storage and survivability. This may be quite op, but the presence of such an ability is justified.

ch 46 USJ P4***

My Hero: Quirk Evolution

Anime & Comics · ZeOwl

JustAnApple

2yr

Commented

Placebo effect?

Bab ini telah dihapus.

Reborn as Thor!

Anime & Comics · Ghost_84

JustAnApple

2yr

Commented

Harem

ch 85 He's Out!

S/R

Anime & Comics · Pure_R18_Terror

JustAnApple

2yr

Commented

Harem

ch 83 Whatever The Fuck....That Is

S/R

Anime & Comics · Pure_R18_Terror

JustAnApple

2yr

Commented

Yes

Bab ini telah dihapus.

Reborn as Thor!

Anime & Comics · Ghost_84

JustAnApple

2yr

Commented

Are we going to see THE CRUEL SUN

ch 42 42. Tide

Sunshine in apocalypse(Escanor)

Book&Literature · Hancock_Sama

JustAnApple

2yr

Posted

In the beginning it was impossible to read, but as you continue to read, the quality improves and this pleases.____________________________________________________________________

The Supreme Being Of Highschool DxD

Anime & Comics · AKIRA_0

JustAnApple

3yr

Posted

The description is pretty good. However, there are two big problems in the first chapters. Too long introduction and half a chapter is the opening theme of some anime

DXD: I Stand Above All [Dropped]

Anime & Comics · Legend27

JustAnApple

3yr

Commented

Quasar. You can google what its mean

Bab ini telah dihapus.

Gravity Control, in MHA

Anime & Comics · Antlike

JustAnApple

3yr

Commented

1

Bab ini telah dihapus.

Vegeta in MHA!

Anime & Comics · Hancock_Sama

JustAnApple

3yr

Posted

The author knows how to write, but there is no plot development. Day one: I am an ordinary person, day two: I became stronger than the average devil. Day three: digimon. Day four: a dungeon to rock me. Day five: I'm going to go to another universe ..... Sorry, what? And where is the development of characters, where are the events of the Dxd universe. Where is anything? If you weren't going to develop the DxD universe, then why did you mention this universe at all? Write a fanfic about Killer Reborn if you want. No, I'm not against traveling to other universes, but is this jammed into the main universe? Even his original world (Earth) was much better developed

Reincarnated as Issei with a Gamer System(DROPPED)

Anime & Comics · ShaggyJoestar69

JustAnApple

3yr

Commented

I am extremely disappointed. Quite. The author has good writing skills, you can see it. But there is one big but. This fanfic is a cliché about getting into the Issei world of DxD. Nevertheless, for all these chapters, each of which is quite large, we completely lack the development of this universe. There is no character development, there are no events associated with this universe. I kept hoping that the dungeon arc would end and the plot would begin. But instead of at least a little advance in the DxD universe, MC just becomes incredibly powerful in a second and decides to go to the long-forgotten Killer Reborn universe. Nice

ch 23 Chapter 23: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!

Reincarnated as Issei with a Gamer System(DROPPED)

Anime & Comics · ShaggyJoestar69

JustAnApple

3yr

Commented

This was the most exciting chapter in this piece. For her sake alone, this fanfic was worth it

ch 20 Sports Festival- Vs Midoriya (2)

Gilgamesh in MHA

Anime & Comics · Believers

JustAnApple

3yr

Commented

I don't know English well, so sorry for possible mistakes. As far as I know MC was created in the image and likeness of God, and in addition to the ability of the eyes had superhuman characteristics, on a par with the gods. I am perfectly aware that he is strong even without them, but for the sake of correctness it would be worth increasing his physical stats. On top of that, even if it's not true, I feel MC as a weakling. Make him at least 30 in physical parameters. thanks